the fury shows. a wonderful and intense haiku. i actually envy your word play. fury itself is a very ferocious word, 'storming fury' is a clever one, shows how hard it will be tame a mind set on 'rising up again'. This haiku reminds me of the phoenix. ;) And I was expecting the usual set of three, plus 'the text'. :) Wonderful nevertheless. Beauty, Glory, Joy, Pain & Fortitude.
Powerful words.
ReplyDeleteNicely written. :)
Beautiful and powerfully done.
ReplyDeletethe fury shows. a wonderful and intense haiku. i actually envy your word play. fury itself is a very ferocious word, 'storming fury' is a clever one, shows how hard it will be tame a mind set on 'rising up again'. This haiku reminds me of the phoenix. ;)
ReplyDeleteAnd I was expecting the usual set of three, plus 'the text'. :) Wonderful nevertheless.
Beauty, Glory, Joy, Pain & Fortitude.
Very imaginative interpretation of the prompt and goes perfectly with the image.
ReplyDelete''Clipped wings urge new flight''
ReplyDeletestretches a perfect scene of your words.