Saturday, August 18, 2012

Peekaboo with the moon!


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Hide behind shadows
Peekaboo with round ripples
Moon's lopsided smile

Slipping clouds reveal
Suppressed laughter echoes loud
Greenery seeks turn







This Haiku is written for the Haiku Heights and the OSI. The prompts for this week are 'GREEN' and 'LOPSIDED' respectively.



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27 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaAugust 18, 2012 at 11:40 PM

    I love the way you write haiku ... Your words are more to be seen than read :-) Well done again :-)

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    1. PranitaAugust 18, 2012 at 11:50 PM

      Thanks so much for all the lovely comments that you write which makes me super happy! ;)

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  2. joanneAugust 19, 2012 at 4:08 AM

    I love the 'suppressed laughter'! a cheerful and lovely set...

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  3. SusanAugust 19, 2012 at 5:51 AM

    First let me thank you for the link under the photo which brought me to a wonderful essay on the use of the moon in poetry where an amazing poem finishes the essay!

    Second, I love these 2 haiku with the moon grin turning to laughter and greenery itself green with envy! The poems are sly in every way, teasing, actually flirting, and making the landscape that much more desirable. Thank you!

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    1. PranitaAugust 19, 2012 at 11:41 AM

      It's my pleasure Susan! M glad you enjoyed this haiku :)
      N m really happy you wer able to connect with the very essence of this haiku that i intended to put across!
      Cheers!

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  4. The Write GirlAugust 19, 2012 at 8:25 AM

    I enjoyed the imagery in both haikus and the photo is stunning.

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  5. Gemma WisemanAugust 19, 2012 at 8:42 AM

    Beautiful visual images illustrated by these haiku! Love the idea of a moon with a lop-sided smile!

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  6. Laura MariaAugust 19, 2012 at 12:02 PM

    Realy nice imagery! Great take on the prompt too.

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  7. Gillena CoxAugust 19, 2012 at 5:37 PM

    your image and haiku resonate well


    much love...

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  8. AnonymousAugust 19, 2012 at 7:37 PM

    "moon´s lopsided smile"...love that!

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  9. JimAugust 20, 2012 at 2:40 AM

    I'm liking your lobsided smile of the moon. I hadn't even noticed before. :)
    Thank you for peeking in on my OSI this morning.
    ..

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  10. Vivian DeloresAugust 20, 2012 at 4:19 AM

    Very evocative! Thank you for sharing.

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  11. Sabyasachi Patra | Tales from Wild IndiaAugust 20, 2012 at 2:52 PM

    Nice landscape image. The words, nicely penned, gells well with the image.

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  12. Sankara Jayanth SAugust 21, 2012 at 4:25 PM

    greenery seeks turn. yes, i does and we hope it gets its fair chance. :)
    a pleasant and beautiful haiku again.

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  13. UnknownAugust 21, 2012 at 8:11 PM

    You write awesome Haiku! I adore them and what a great picture prompt.Brilliant job, Pranita.
    Mine is here
    Have you a ROCKING AND WEEK!!!
    hugs
    shakira

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  14. It's Dee for UAugust 23, 2012 at 7:48 PM

    Excellent Pranita. Very beautiful Haiku.

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