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Fade into gauche naught
Eerie chill freezes his soul
Creepy emptiness
Lopsided luck kills
Black heart shudders from white death
Engulfing silence
It's funny how darkness can engulf you so much, to such an extent sometimes... that you can get scared of the first ray of light!!!
This haiku is written for the picture prompt provided by the MAG and the OSI with the prompt 'LOPSIDED'.
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Indeed ... haiku magic.
ReplyDeleteThank u Helen :)
Deletenice take!
ReplyDeleteJJRod'z
Thanks a lot pal :)
Deleteengulfing silence...wow!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by :)
Deletecreepy emptiness...nice capture that....and love the opening line of the second...whew...smiles...good take...
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Brian! :) M glad you enjoyed it!
DeleteDark and chilling...
ReplyDeleteThat's what i felt when i saw the picture ;)
DeleteWell done :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks pal :)
DeleteVery spooky!
ReplyDeleteHehe... Tried a different take! ;)
DeleteI love the different spins on this guy. Eerie works, why did I not think of it? :)
ReplyDeleteThanks buddy! M sure you'd have done better! :)
Deletevery creepy- well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks Kathe! Cheers! :)
DeleteWhat a dark and stormy haiku! Bravo!
ReplyDeleteThanks Rene! :)
DeleteI love your expressive work here, Pranita. Clouded, foggy forms have that eerie, creepy feel, don't they? Thanks for sharing. =D
ReplyDeleteThank you Linda! Overwhelmed by the response to this try!
DeleteCheers :)
Lopsided luck kills.
ReplyDeleteThat really works!
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Thanks Sue! :)
DeleteWe often read our fears into the night..for every bump we shiver. Love your haiku poem!
ReplyDeleteIndeed..! Our imaginations and paranoia take a hike in the dark ;)
DeleteThanks so much Susie!
Good thoughts and nice write Pranita!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thanks a lot Hank!
DeleteI'm pulling up the covers, because this is when things go bump in the dark of night!
ReplyDeleteLoL... good luck with that :P
Deleteawwww...you did that so beautifully , creepy though. I wish you would have written a longer version like a story. Well done!
ReplyDeleteMine is here
Have you a ROCKING AND WEEK!!!
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shakira
Thank u Shakira... A haiku loses it's beauty when it's made into a poem. So i didn't elongate it.
DeleteM glad u liked it! :)
xo
you set a very eerie tone
ReplyDeleteI tried to ;)
DeleteThis is very powerful, loved your choice of words. :)
ReplyDeleteUnlikely to ever happen to you, Pranita ! . Reminds me of waking late at night to the static test pattern after falling asleep in a chair !, thanks . The silence of the white noise
ReplyDeleteTrue that Kutamun! It's an eerie silence wen u wake up at night! It's as if the silence is screaming!
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