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Snow feathers caress
Warm memories churn feelings
Silent smile escapes
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White haunting daggers
Sharp emotions hide no more
Snow shadows' slow dance
This Haiku is written for the Haiku Heights. The prompt for the week is 'SNOW'.
Hi Pranita,
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku for the winter season. I can feel the chill of the snow reading the lines. Keep it up :)
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Enjoyed both haiku. Imaginative use of snow.
ReplyDeleteNice set Pranita ~
ReplyDeleteWishing you Happy Holidays ~
Beautiful Haiku. Loved it :-)
ReplyDeletewell-crafted haiku....espec. liked the feeling of 'snow feathers' perfect description of how they really feel.....
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written, Pranita
ReplyDeleteBoth the haiku are beautiful..pretty good take on snow.,
ReplyDeleteVisit me here Pranita for x'mas chain of haiku.
http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2012/12/santas-smile-does-tricks.html
RS:)
Second haiku is my very favorite - fantastic take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteLike the idea of snow bringing warm memories-so true!
ReplyDeleteMakes me shiver reading it - great take on snow.
ReplyDeletewonderful contrast!
ReplyDeletevivid sketches of the contrasting feelings... loved both haiku.
ReplyDeleteAwesome :)
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