Saturday, December 8, 2012

Heavy breath near cold fireplace!

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Dripping dull moments
Heavy breath near cold fireplace
Coal turns blue pain red






 
Bottled pain is just another name for burning fire. Extinguish it before you get engulfed into it.







This Haiku is written for the Haiku Heights. The prompt for the week is 'PAIN'.

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13 comments:

  1. Sankara Jayanth SDecember 8, 2012 at 10:36 AM

    wonderful!! 'bottled pain is another name for burning fire', wow..! the haiku is brilliant in terms of the word play, but the annotation was simply brilliant in expression.
    Riddle Of Hearts

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  2. provoqdDecember 8, 2012 at 11:37 AM

    Hi Pranita :)

    Ahh, perfect haiku for the winter season, with wine and fire.
    Nice post, keep it up.

    Regards

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

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  3. anthonynorthDecember 8, 2012 at 2:25 PM

    Some powerful words this week - yours is no exception. Excellent.

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  4. Amrit SinhaDecember 8, 2012 at 2:50 PM

    Beautiful ... you have carved the imagery so well !!!

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  5. GraceDecember 8, 2012 at 6:39 PM

    I like the change of color by the fireplace ~

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  6. AnonymousDecember 8, 2012 at 6:51 PM

    Your image of turning blue pain red captured my imagination!

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  7. Woman'n'BeyondDecember 8, 2012 at 7:19 PM

    I liked the thought behind it and haiku, it is simply wonderful!

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  8. Sri ValliDecember 9, 2012 at 6:59 PM

    Beautiful imagination and lovely haiku Pranita :)

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  9. PremaDecember 9, 2012 at 9:27 PM

    Very strong on imagery ! Keep it up !

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  10. Judith WesterfieldDecember 10, 2012 at 6:27 AM

    Pranita,

    I'm affiliated with a new National Pain organization that is not up on the web yet. (I'm not paid!)
    With permission I would like to send them your Pain Haiku as they are interested in using creative expressions in promos and/or the site itself. However, I need written permission.
    If you give permission send me an e-mail at judithwesterfield@gmail.com with a cut-n-paste of the haiku you are giving permission for and whether if you want your name attached or want to remain anonymous.

    I believe your haiku is very strong.

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  11. AnonymousDecember 10, 2012 at 2:21 PM

    This one's beautiful--especially delightful on a cold winter's night :)

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  12. kaykualaDecember 10, 2012 at 4:19 PM

    Bottled pain is a long lasting sufferer. True, Pranita! Rid off it fast!

    Hank

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  13. PratibhaDecember 12, 2012 at 2:00 AM

    interesting thought !
    I so loved it ..

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