Tuesday, April 9, 2013

Hymns heard within - Haiku 'I'

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Velvety smoke
Rising senses float
Fragrant thoughts, my vicinity

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Crumpled aroma
Ambience triggers the divine
Hymns heard within










This Haiku is written for the April A2Z Heights at Haiku Heights. The prompt for the day is 'INCENSE'.


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9 comments:

  1. Ramesh SoodApril 10, 2013 at 12:12 AM

    A prompt can trigger so many lovely thoughts.. wow..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/04/aroma-of-first-crush.html

    RS

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  2. Sankara Jayanth SApril 10, 2013 at 12:14 AM

    hymns heard within.. brilliant!!! i loved it! Keep writing! :)
    And if you'd like to read mine, here it is: Vain Energy

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  3. KISLAYA GOPALApril 10, 2013 at 12:21 AM

    Wonderfully written. :)

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  4. UnknownApril 10, 2013 at 5:05 AM

    So so loved this Pranita, both stanzas are exceptional. Rising senses float and hymns heard within - delicious.

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  5. PanchaliApril 10, 2013 at 10:01 AM

    beautiful...'ambiance triggers the divine'Fine spiritual winds!! Love this..

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  6. Amrit SinhaApril 10, 2013 at 12:23 PM

    What I loved about your recent haiku is that you have stopped following the 5-7-5 format, and that adds an extra bit of lucid charm in your words ... I have read somewhere that 5-7-5 was meant for the Japanese syllables and are not appropriate for the English formats ... rather, I always felt that these restrictions made a Haiku seem heavier when written in a strict "5-7-5" format.

    It's always a pleasure reading your haiku ... perhaps you may not know, but during my initial days I learnt a lot about haiku from your blog :-)

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  7. AnonymousApril 10, 2013 at 2:00 PM

    Very nice

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  8. NankaApril 10, 2013 at 3:06 PM

    I liked 'velvety smoke' and 'crumpled aroma' as it triggers 'fragrant thoughts'!!

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  9. Reading PleasureApril 10, 2013 at 8:57 PM

    Brilliantly done with nice imagery

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