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Society, his desert
Footsteps on sand disowned
Harsh windy treatment
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Seek oasis of love
Thirsty beside a spring
Burning pariah
This Haiku is written for the April A2Z Heights at Haiku Heights. The prompt for today is 'PARIAH'.
Footsteps on sand disowned....a very beautiful line..fantastic expression....so original..thanks for the treat Pranita..
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Great photo and beautiful words.
ReplyDeleteLonely and wondering, sad and unaccepted really is "harsh windy treatment" indeed!!
ReplyDeleteHarsh treatment, indeed...beautifully penned!
ReplyDeleteI really like "society, his desert". Excellent description!
ReplyDeleteYes, there can be people who are rejected yet others play at annoying the establishment
ReplyDeleteYou've captured ,so well, the loneliness inherent in being an outcast
ReplyDeleteYour site states 'here to spread magic' - with this you certainly have Pranita- beautiful!
ReplyDeleteWow. Nicely Written. :)
ReplyDelete2nd haiku is brilliant beyond words
ReplyDeleteHarsh treatment seems to be the lot of some.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.
ReplyDeleteThis speaks a lot !!!
ReplyDelete'Footsteps on sand disowned
ReplyDeleteHarsh windy treatment' very deep and thought provoking lines!
The second haiku is simly beautiful and conveys the discrimination prevalent in society a subtle way.
Absolutely stunning, you have such elegance
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely stunning, such elegant use of language
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