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Ditch the black monster
Emerald eyes lure but kill
Body survives, soul dies
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Dreaded green danger
Lock your mind, lose the key
Fearful drone, no music
That evil voice in your head that is so loud at times drowning your true inner voice can lead you to the darkest path of negativity. Beware of your senses. When the evil takes over, even basking in glory sends your soul plunging into an eternal pit of no return.
This Haiku is written for the April A2Z Heights at Haiku Heights. The prompt for the day is 'DRONE'.
Wonderful take on the prompt! Very dramatic!
ReplyDeleteMy mind was tired when I visited to read this haiku. I read it and ran away. I din't get a thing. :D
ReplyDeleteAfter a half hour, I felt brave again and came back. insightful haiku! powerful. how lost we can be within ourselves.!! "eternal pit of no return"? *bows*
i come here for the descriptions to be frank. You have this knack of explaining complex things in a simple way. Keep going!
Awesome.
ReplyDeleteA little scary though. :P
Nicely written. :)
Is envy the dreaded green danger?
ReplyDeletePollinators’ Drone
Dramatic enemy of the soul beautifully described in these dramatic haiku!
ReplyDeleteFreaking spooky picture sets the tone there - love it
ReplyDeleteI found it pretty intriguing, Pranita...well done to have thought of this to use 'Drone'
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I loved the pic, indeed close off your mind to ward off the evil forces of negativity. Well done.
ReplyDeleteI find it intriguing...You did well with 'drone'..unique take..
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Like how you put it making the drone fearful and dreaded!!
ReplyDeleteSo true Pranita...
ReplyDeleteAnd yours is a different take...
Enjoyed!
ewww.....that was scary!! Fantastic..
ReplyDeleteVery dark, very original take on the prompt! I'm scared!
ReplyDeleteDark and dramatic take
ReplyDeleteDark and dramatic, Pranita
ReplyDeletea mixture of horror and drama :) great one!
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