Sunday, May 6, 2012

When empty eyes don't blink.

Courtesy

Beer bottle in hands
Naked body against the wall
Wasted, losing self

Violent wind blows
Jet black hair covers fair face
Empty eyes don't blink

Tears make way slowly
Haunting negativity
Life seems a burden

Face down on hard bed
Pillow soaks with flood of ire
Ghastly hour of doom





This Haiku is written for OSI and Haiku Heights. The prompt for this week is 'DEPRESSION' and 'HOUR' respectively.


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25 comments:

  1. Sankara Jayanth SMay 6, 2012 at 5:34 PM

    i loved the last stanza/haiku. pillow soaked with flood of ire. Ho-oh, that line is intenssseee!! an interesting take overall. :)

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    1. PranitaMay 6, 2012 at 6:35 PM

      Thanks a lot Jayanth! That's my fav line too ;)

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  2. Megha SarinMay 6, 2012 at 5:52 PM

    Aww loved it. So touching :(

    love
    http://www.meghasarin.blogspot.com

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  3. indu chhibberMay 6, 2012 at 7:06 PM

    good one,apt depiction of depression.

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  4. Ruchi JainMay 6, 2012 at 9:05 PM

    an expressive one, i liked the first line..

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  5. AroojMay 6, 2012 at 9:22 PM

    ''wasted losing self''

    these three words explain a lot.

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  6. Diana TenevaMay 6, 2012 at 11:38 PM

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  7. Harshad MehtaMay 7, 2012 at 8:00 AM

    I can imagine the picture! So well rendered.

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  8. Sujatha SathyaMay 7, 2012 at 11:41 AM

    the pain is screaming out of the lines

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  9. GayathriMay 7, 2012 at 12:35 PM

    Nice poetry... depression is painful n you have beautifully depicted it..! :)

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  10. AnkurMay 7, 2012 at 10:59 PM

    You write Haiku with an ease that is almost disconcerting...
    This was a brilliant piece of work !

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  11. anthonynorthMay 7, 2012 at 11:16 PM

    A perfect description.

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  12. inquisitive-lifeMay 7, 2012 at 11:43 PM

    Pranita,

    Beautiful Post. Thou li'l dark but very powerful.

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  13. Sri ValliMay 8, 2012 at 10:35 PM

    Can see the depression...Lovely creative description Pranitha!
    Depression

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