Monday, May 28, 2012

Window to the other side.

Courtesy

  
Enclosed with secrets
Bricks of trust form foundation
Unbreakable bonds

Shadows follow light
Window to the other side
Destined horizon

Life is a mystery
Yet clue lies around corner
Believe, future, joy!




This haiku is written for the picture prompt provided by The MAG and for Haiku Heights, the prompt being 'JOY'.



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38 comments:

  1. Brian MillerMay 28, 2012 at 2:50 AM

    life is a mystery...and that is sometimes confusing yet also sometimes so reassuring...guess it comes down to those bricks of trust you know....

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    1. PranitaMay 28, 2012 at 10:24 AM

      Yeah...if you've got ur foundation bricks right, the home of life wil be undoubtedly a happy destination!

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  2. Danny SimonMay 28, 2012 at 7:34 AM

    Trust is the glue that holds relationships together!

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    1. PranitaMay 28, 2012 at 10:24 AM

      @Danny... indeed! :)
      @Loredana... Thank you dear... :)

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  3. SwetaMay 28, 2012 at 12:51 PM

    Beautiful words Pranita . Keep writing ! :-)

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  4. CathyMay 28, 2012 at 1:42 PM

    Life is a mystery
    Yet clue lies around corner

    Good hint. I nearly didn't see the stairs around the house the first time. :)

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    1. PranitaMay 28, 2012 at 3:06 PM

      Hehe... thanks... dose r my fav lines here! ;)

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  5. TigerbriteMay 28, 2012 at 6:18 PM

    This is excellent.
    I also have problems loading your blog page.

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    1. PranitaMay 28, 2012 at 11:14 PM

      Thanks buddy!
      N abt the page... m on it soon! :)

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  6. Jaideep RaoMay 28, 2012 at 10:42 PM

    Yet clue lies around corner..good good!

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  7. zongrikMay 29, 2012 at 7:28 AM

    it does seem as if whoever is living there is living in secret

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  8. ʞɐMay 29, 2012 at 2:42 PM

    Nicely written to perfection.
    Life is indeed a mystery and the clue seems so distant even when it lies around corner.

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    1. PranitaMay 30, 2012 at 3:06 AM

      Thank you Ajay! Welcome to Miracles Happen!

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  9. Maude LynnMay 29, 2012 at 5:57 PM

    Really well done!

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  10. Silent Otto May 29, 2012 at 6:09 PM

    Very philosophical, Pranita, you have opened a portal. Thanks

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  11. Vinay Leo R.May 29, 2012 at 7:40 PM

    The last one could very much stand on its own. Imaginative!

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  12. AnonymousMay 29, 2012 at 11:02 PM

    Nice work! Great meanings between the lines! :)

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  13. HelenMay 29, 2012 at 11:05 PM

    The artwork placed on the black background of your blog is really lovely - I also enjoyed the poem.

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    1. PranitaMay 30, 2012 at 3:08 AM

      Thank you so much Helen for appreciating my art! :)
      Cheers!

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  14. Tess KincaidMay 29, 2012 at 11:25 PM

    Follow the clues...very nice...

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  15. kaykualaMay 30, 2012 at 4:43 AM

    The first has deep thoughts around it. I imagine the bond of families within the house would keep their privacy intact within their own family. Great write Pranita!

    Hank

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    1. PranitaMay 30, 2012 at 6:42 AM

      Thanks Kaykuala! You seem to have penetrated through the bricks of my wall ;)

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  16. The Write GirlMay 30, 2012 at 7:10 AM

    I love the ending. So very triumphant.

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  17. Sankara Jayanth SMay 30, 2012 at 5:04 PM

    we are INDEED destined to reach the horizon!
    beautiful, Pranita.

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  18. SajjuMay 31, 2012 at 10:48 AM

    Life is a mystery
    Yet clue lies around corner
    Believe, future, joy!

    Ammmmmmazing lines... Loved it... What a delicious piece of poem...

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    1. PranitaJune 1, 2012 at 8:49 AM

      Thanks Sajju...! :) M glad u liked it so much..

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    2. SajjuJune 4, 2012 at 10:48 AM

      I wish there is 'like' option in your blog also.. :D would have liked both ur poem and comment... :D

      haha... got used to this like option in FB... huhhh..

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    3. PranitaJune 4, 2012 at 3:23 PM

      Hehe... the FB addiction! I get it... ;)

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