Saturday, July 14, 2012

First peek of loving future.




  
Nectar on the lip
First peek of loving future
Promises are sealed
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Cry of the just born
Bathed with first tears of joy
True symbolic love
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Buds bloom and rejoice
Dancing in happy spirit
Swaying to my tune







The firsts are always memorable. The beginnings- the end of which is a mystery is always an exciting phase. Cheers to a happy start...!


This Haiku is written for the Haiku Heights. The prompt of the week is 'FIRST'.




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30 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaJuly 14, 2012 at 8:54 PM

    The buds really seem to blossom and dance in joy ... lovely lines :-)

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  2. carol l mckennaJuly 14, 2012 at 10:50 PM

    ...dancing in happy spirit ~ love that line ~ wonderful haiku ^_^ ~ thanks, ( A Creative Harbor)

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  3. joanneJuly 15, 2012 at 12:55 AM

    Now that you have said it, and in such a beautiful way, I can see that even my flowers 'dance' too!

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    1. PranitaJuly 15, 2012 at 1:01 AM

      Awww.. that's sweet! Spreading joy, are we? ;)

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  4. JaskirancanvasJuly 15, 2012 at 1:13 AM

    three different thoughts and three beautiful description.. great work Pranita.. loved it..

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    1. PranitaJuly 15, 2012 at 1:25 AM

      Thanks so much Jaskiran :) Much appreciated!

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  5. Claude LOPEZ-GINISTYJuly 15, 2012 at 1:35 AM

    नमस्ते
    Dear Pranita, you expressed the three main forms of love in a very sweet way!

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    1. PranitaJuly 15, 2012 at 2:34 AM

      Namaste to you too Claude :)
      Thank u so much for stopping by!

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  6. susanwritespreciseJuly 15, 2012 at 2:09 AM

    Beautiful Haiku!

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  7. Christine "Chrissi" L. VillaJuly 15, 2012 at 2:32 AM

    I've just took a FIRST peek of your blog and I want you to know that I also do believe in "The Secret" and miracles do happen every day. Just being alive is a miracle and a gift itself.
    I'm happy to have found YOU. I see the buds blooming and dancing to your happy tune. :-)

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    1. PranitaJuly 15, 2012 at 2:37 AM

      Aww... that's so sweet of you Christine! Thanks a lot for reading me! :) M glad you find the same concepts amusing as i do! It's a pleasure knowing u :)

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  8. Vaishali JainJuly 15, 2012 at 2:37 AM

    Loved the second one the most, Pranita! I must say, you have a lovely blog. Interesting! :) :)

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    1. Vaishali JainJuly 15, 2012 at 2:41 AM

      Ahh! And now I see, two of my friends already like your blog. Hmm...guess I need to do some stalking around. ;)

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    2. PranitaJuly 15, 2012 at 7:57 PM

      Welcome to Miracles Happen Vaishali :) Thanks for stopping by!
      Ur more than welcome to stalk.. hehe
      Cheers!

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  9. GraceJuly 15, 2012 at 5:38 AM

    Nice set...I specially like last one ~

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  10. kaykualaJuly 15, 2012 at 8:27 AM

    Can relate to this,Pranita! Had gone through 3 issues decades ago. Now it's anticipating their turn to make the family bigger and bigger. Great haiku set, Ma'am!

    Hank

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  11. AnonymousJuly 15, 2012 at 11:19 AM

    A very lovely future you have envisaged here, Pranita. May it come true for you.

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  12. TigerbriteJuly 15, 2012 at 6:07 PM

    Some very happy beginnings in your lovely haiku :)

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  13. Cressida de NovaJuly 15, 2012 at 8:52 PM

    Your set is like Spring...new birth and growth...life anew.

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  14. CYNOSUREJuly 16, 2012 at 1:18 AM

    Beautiful Haiku from the Haiku Queen... :)

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  15. PranitaJuly 16, 2012 at 11:17 AM

    Thanks a lot Rahul ji !

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