Sunday, July 8, 2012

Soaring tale of glory.

Courtesy
Prick beauty bubble
Real poor life unfolds, rich!
Candy floss melts in

Grazing pet toils too
Sweet flavored talks digested
Vital dream petals 

Multicolored set
Paint on outside of balloons
Soar, tale of glory!

We often wish to live in a fantasy world where everything is perfect. Such a perfection is fake. When we are forced to face real life situations, the beauty that lies within this world will seem sweet only when we realize the gifts it has wrapped for us. The manifestation of  fantasy is what we fail to see in real life. Dreams come true when we are not sleeping right?

This Haiku is written for the picture prompt provided by the MAG. Also written for the OSI and the Haiku Heights. The prompts are 'BALLOON' and 'VITAL' respectively.

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19 comments:

  1. Tess KincaidJuly 8, 2012 at 10:48 PM

    Unique juxtapositions of words here...nice!

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    1. PranitaJuly 10, 2012 at 2:22 PM

      Thanks Tess... i learnt a new word frm ur comment! ;)

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  2. JJ Roa RodriguezJuly 8, 2012 at 11:49 PM

    nicely written...

    JJRod'z

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  3. Brian MillerJuly 9, 2012 at 3:34 PM

    nice...i def love the first one i can see the candy floss in the sky for sure...smiles...some fun pieces this week...

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  4. Amrit SinhaJuly 9, 2012 at 9:16 PM

    Superb combination of the topics ... loved it :-)

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  5. Susan AndersonJuly 9, 2012 at 11:34 PM

    Sweet flavored talks digested.

    I've eaten a few of those!

    =)

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    1. PranitaJuly 10, 2012 at 2:25 PM

      Haha... we all have at one time or another, haven't we? ;)

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  6. 21 WitsJuly 10, 2012 at 9:33 AM

    I like your visions! A very fun read!

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  7. AakritiJuly 10, 2012 at 5:45 PM

    Dropping by ur place for the first time. I liked the way you blended a picture, weaved in ur thoughts and a haiku. Though I had a lil trouble understanding all the haiku. And yeah dreams do come true when we are asleep;) they unleash themselves when we lower our guards;)

    Yarn of words

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    1. PranitaJuly 10, 2012 at 7:07 PM

      Welcome to Miracles Happen Aakriti.. :)
      Thanks a lot for the kind comments!
      Cheers..!

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  8. UnknownJuly 11, 2012 at 3:43 AM

    I love the sensually expressive ideas that explode from your haiku, Pranita. Thank you for sharing this wonderful writing. =D

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    1. PranitaJuly 14, 2012 at 11:20 AM

      Thanks so much for Linda for your kind feedback! :)

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  9. N.S.KirtiJuly 12, 2012 at 4:14 PM

    How wonderfully you have said the truth of life Pranita! This is a beautiful set of haiku, i loved many lines it especially "Soar, tale of glory!" :)
    I have tagged you in my blogpost here Pranita-http://versesfrommyheart.blogspot.in/2012/07/tag-time.html

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    1. PranitaJuly 14, 2012 at 11:22 AM

      Thanks a lot Kirti... for the comment and the tag! :) So sweet of you! Will attend to it soon... ;)

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  10. obat asam uratJuly 24, 2012 at 10:26 AM

    postingan yang bagus tentang"Soaring tale of glory."

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