Saturday, September 1, 2012

Creepy thorns to glistening petals!


Creepy thorns rise high
Drawbridge of my life saves me
Petals glisten, smile!


I just joined my first job yesterday. What seemed like a thorny way has finally been crossed and now i can feel all the fear of the unknown slowly make way for beautiful times ahead!

Seeking all your blessings to make this journey one of my best! :)


This Haiku is written for the September Challenge in Haiku Heights. The prompt for today is 'DRAWBRIDGE'.




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42 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaSeptember 1, 2012 at 1:07 AM

    All the best for this new turn in your life :-)

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  2. Susan DanielsSeptember 1, 2012 at 2:42 AM

    Good luck with the new job!

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  3. ElleceeSeptember 1, 2012 at 5:16 AM

    Unique Haiku, Pranita. All the best in your new job.

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  4. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 1, 2012 at 5:29 AM

    Nicely done. I love this haiku ... it's so in balance. Good job.

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  5. BarbaraSeptember 1, 2012 at 8:11 AM

    Blessings!! Love the haiku especially the little surprise of 'petals glisten'

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  6. provoqdSeptember 1, 2012 at 11:25 AM

    Exquisite, Pranita :)
    Thats a nice Haiku and equally captivating photograph.
    All the best for the new job :D :D :D
    Keep posting Pranita :)

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

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    1. PranitaSeptember 1, 2012 at 12:51 PM

      Thanks a lot Jay for uplifting my spirits with ur generous comment! :)

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  7. UnknownSeptember 1, 2012 at 11:40 AM

    Brilliant job Pranita. That were some beautiful lines I read. :)

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  8. Ramesh SoodSeptember 1, 2012 at 1:23 PM

    Lovely Haiku...and congratulations on your first job..enjoy the feeling..it's tough road out there..but you will make it....I know..

    For my haiku.. http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2012/08/wounded-walls-feel-safe.html#comment-form

    RS:)

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  9. Diwakar NarayanSeptember 1, 2012 at 4:56 PM

    Awesome! and Congrats on your first job.

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  10. UnknownSeptember 1, 2012 at 6:41 PM

    I like the imagery of thorns rising high

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  11. Sasha A. PalmerSeptember 1, 2012 at 7:35 PM

    I like the transition from thorns to petals. Comforting.
    I hope your job is all petals (maybe with an occasional thorn, just to make it more interesting) :-)

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    1. PranitaSeptember 1, 2012 at 10:30 PM

      Aww.. thank u so much buddy! I really hope so too... :)

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  12. UnknownSeptember 1, 2012 at 8:34 PM

    Good use of tension in making this challenge work so well!

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  13. Tarun MazumdarSeptember 1, 2012 at 9:02 PM

    All the best... even I am starting my career from Monday... cheers to us!

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    1. PranitaSeptember 1, 2012 at 10:31 PM

      Wow... really! That's too cool.. All the very best to u too dude!
      Cheers! :)

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  14. Someone is SpecialSeptember 1, 2012 at 9:12 PM

    "Creepy Thorns" Liked it.. Congrats on your job and Good luck!

    Someone is Special

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  15. A Hopeless RomanticSeptember 1, 2012 at 9:55 PM

    I'm bemused by the image: Petals Glisten,smile!

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  16. AnonymousSeptember 1, 2012 at 11:33 PM

    I like the happy ending!

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  17. Sabyasachi Patra | Tales from Wild IndiaSeptember 2, 2012 at 12:21 AM

    Pranita,
    Congratulations on your new job! All the Best for future!

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  18. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 2, 2012 at 3:32 AM

    Aren't you glad for the safety afforded by the drawbridge? :)

    Drawbridge

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  19. PattiKenSeptember 2, 2012 at 6:12 AM

    Congratulations, Pranita! Now that you've crossed the drawbridge away from the thorns, I hope your future is full of flowers.

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    1. PranitaSeptember 2, 2012 at 11:30 PM

      Thanks a lot Patti for this beautiful wish! :)

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  20. kapilSeptember 2, 2012 at 3:08 PM

    Congrats and all the very best for you future.. and keep blogging
    Mind Stuff

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  21. HazelSeptember 2, 2012 at 4:29 PM

    Blessings be yours as you use your drawbridge in this new journey you are taking.

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  22. indu chhibberSeptember 2, 2012 at 7:26 PM

    Shine & enjoy Pranita.

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