Thursday, June 28, 2012

Cold wings of fire!


Courtesy
 
Love can make you burn
Flames engulf the shining pearl
Ignorance not bliss?

Breaking broken heart 
Cold wings wrapped around the burn
Why still feel the heat?

Left what was behind
Gathering lost confidence
Trust the crystal ball? 






This Haiku is written for the SHW and the OSI. The prompts are 'CONFIDENCE' and 'CRYSTAL' respectively.


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20 comments:

  1. Bruce MillerJune 28, 2012 at 12:47 AM

    Pranita, beautifully expressed sentiments, the three haiku make a harmonius whole!

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  2. carol l mckennaJune 28, 2012 at 1:12 AM

    Ah, so true but like the line ...gathering confidence ~ trust yourself and rest will fall into place ~ thanks ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)

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    1. PranitaJune 28, 2012 at 1:30 PM

      Totally! There are phases in everyone's life...! Makes us stronger..

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  3. anthonynorthJune 28, 2012 at 1:16 AM

    A lot of truth in those haiku.

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  4. Tara TylerJune 28, 2012 at 3:42 AM

    much confidence is lost in a break up... takes time to build back up!

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    1. PranitaJune 28, 2012 at 1:32 PM

      Break up..? yes! But this haiku can be also viewed as someone loved, nt just a partner.. breaks your heart! Confidence is lost when anyone u love breaks ur heart!

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  5. joanneJune 28, 2012 at 4:46 AM

    lovely words, and familiar.....'crystal ball'? well, they love is a crap shoot

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  6. SreejaJune 28, 2012 at 10:22 AM

    Lovely, caught all the fire and the burning left....

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  7. kaykualaJune 28, 2012 at 9:21 PM

    Forget the disappointments and make amends. Life is too short to gamble. True enough Pranita!

    Hank

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  8. Danny SimonJune 28, 2012 at 10:44 PM

    It's easy to get broken.... what's difficult is to repair! But we must be ready to repair too!! Well written Pranita!

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    1. PranitaJune 28, 2012 at 11:36 PM

      True.. Repairing/restoring is the hard part! Thanks Danny! :)

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  9. RiaJune 29, 2012 at 1:48 AM

    I like how the 3 work together to express the thought

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  10. RajJune 29, 2012 at 9:28 AM

    You are really awesome in Haikus. This was fantastic. Very exquisitely written!

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