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Bittersweet moments
Flavors of experience
Recipe of life
Tired eyes still sharp
Fickle past to strong present
Locked by aging bones
Tasting fruits of past
Counting all blessings received
Hungry happiness
They say, 'As you sow, so shall you reap'. Everyone wishes for a happy peaceful old age. It depends on us how we make it. If we collect good blessings on our journey, we'll sit back someday and count them with content. Else, we'll be left at the hands of age, hungry for happiness!
This Haiku is written for the picture prompt provided by The MAG. Also written for The OSI and The Haiku Heights. The prompts for this week are 'FICKLE' and 'LOCK' respectively.
Well done!!:-) A positive Haiku.Inspiring.
ReplyDeleteThank you Rahul :)
Delete"Tasting fruits of past,Counting all blessings received,Hungry happiness"
ReplyDeleteyou always manage to make me say WOW... this is yet another full of life haiku of yours... :)
lovely.. :)
Thank u so much Maharukh... ur comment alsways makes me smile :)
DeleteCheers...!
:) I assure you its mutual... though my blog missed you so much this time.. ;)
DeleteDont wry... my presence will be there soon... been a lil busy back home! :)
DeleteLovely! They say if you want a cumulative effect of blessings, you have to start sowing now! Well written Pranita!
ReplyDeleteIndeed... Thank you Danny! :)
DeleteNice take on the prompt Pranita!:)
ReplyDeleteThanks much Tarang :)
DeleteUltimate truth conveyed here,. yeah, do good, be good!
ReplyDeleteDo good, be good! True!
DeleteI enjoyed your haiku! I'm a huge fan of the form ...I also think your profile description is quite nice!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Helen! M flattered! :)
DeletePerhaps its best to leave the past for a strong future.. Good way to say that.
ReplyDeleteYuppp... thank you :)
DeleteExcellent set of Haiku. I like recipe of life.
ReplyDeleteThank you Harshad ji :)
DeleteCreative!
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteThank you Loredana :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful work! Love the second one best.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :)
DeleteNice weaving of all the prompts ~
ReplyDeleteThank you Grace!
DeleteI really like this and the sentiments behind it. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :)
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