Night waves sing berceuse
Bedlam in my skin wiped out
Leaving behind calm
Pandemonium
Scored out of my psyche, no signs!
Melody prevails
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There's nothing like lying by the ocean in the night, with the waves lapping your feet, the wind howling, the sound of the waves singing it's choicest songs for you. Tranquility personified, worries lost, problems hidden and bliss at it's peak!
Memories of night out flashed!,lot of new words for me here :)
ReplyDeleteThat was exactly what i was picturing in my head when i wrote it :)
DeleteSo beautiful melody.
ReplyDeleteIndeed! :)
DeleteYes, bliss at its peak..I felt it just now..here.. Parinita..
ReplyDeleteM glad my haiku communicated to you Ramesh ji! :)
DeleteA really beautiful melody :-) . Love- Sweta
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Sweta... :)
DeleteCheers..
Its really good to be here again...a very lovely haiku ...loved this moment u have brought of..superb
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot dear... :) Thanks for stopping by yet again...
DeleteWonderful haiku ~ awesome photo ~ 'felt the waves on my feet' ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteThank u Carol... M delighted! :)
DeleteNamaste!
A lovely haiku and photo. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
ReplyDeleteMy pleasure Ellecee! :)
DeleteInspiring picture and lovely words ~
ReplyDeleteThanks Grace! :)
DeleteVery well done. Love the picture, it's (as Grace already said) an inspirational picture.
ReplyDeleteThanks much Chevrefeuille! M glad u liked it.. :)
DeleteCertainly Pranita! It's exquisite lying by the beach. Your words rang loud and clear! Great take!
ReplyDeleteHank
Indeed... Thanks a lot buddy! :)
DeleteLovely set and so enchanting picture!:)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Tarang! :)
DeleteThank goodness, after all that bedlam, melody prevails!
ReplyDeleteCloud Singer, Come
Indeed! :)
DeleteVery tranquil melody of waves and wind :)
ReplyDeleteThank you very much! :)
DeleteWonderful use of that word berceuse!
ReplyDeleteNicely!!
Thanks much!!!
DeleteO how sweet is this one!!!
ReplyDeleteLove it so much!!
Indeed nothing so beautiful :)
Well written!
~Keep the Spark ALive..
Thanks a lot Rachana... M delighted to see such an enthusiastic comment! :)
DeleteCheers!
Beautifully penned Pranita...Ocean at night...really a beautiful sight!
ReplyDeleteThanks Valli... indeed a sight to behold! :)
DeleteDeep and creative. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Adura.. :)
Deletethis one beautifully written...very true..."Melody Prevails"... :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Sarabjeet! :)
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