Monday, September 24, 2012

Building lego dreams!



Sleepy eye petals
Gliding over to pink clouds
Building lego dreams


This shaky picture of me with my nephew is somehow very very close to my heart. There's a mystical side to this picture that connects me to the little one in words i can't express!




This Haiku is written for the September Challenge in Haiku Heights. The prompt for today is 'SLEEP'.


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20 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaSeptember 25, 2012 at 12:17 AM

    Wonderful !!!

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  2. Ramesh SoodSeptember 25, 2012 at 12:19 AM

    This picture is very beautiful...and what you say with it is more beautiful...Pranita..

    RS:)

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2012/09/no-sleep-in-her-eyes.html

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 25, 2012 at 2:09 AM

    Enjoyed this one, probably because I love babies and children: you have captured one of those perfect moments.

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  4. joanneSeptember 25, 2012 at 4:45 AM

    children are so lucky.....they have no worries or stress, and can fall asleep so readily (if they are clean and fed!)...love the eyelids as 'petals'!

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  5. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 25, 2012 at 5:04 AM

    Love the way you've used the prompt. The line 'building lego dreams' is very strong.

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  6. kaykualaSeptember 25, 2012 at 5:15 AM

    To be involved in playthings with the little ones can be a most rewarding experience for both.Nicely Pranita!

    Hank

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  7. Susan DanielsSeptember 25, 2012 at 5:20 AM

    Oh, I so love the Lego dreams...

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  8. BarbaraSeptember 25, 2012 at 5:54 AM

    This is just beautiful!! I love every line!

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  9. PattiKenSeptember 25, 2012 at 7:09 AM

    I really love "building Lego dreams." Very nice.

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  10. Judith WesterfieldSeptember 25, 2012 at 9:42 AM

    I too echo Patti - "lego dreams" is genius.

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  11. SusanSeptember 25, 2012 at 4:31 PM

    The thing is the surprise of Lego dreams after eye petals and pink clouds! Break those stereotypes!

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  12. Reading PleasureSeptember 25, 2012 at 5:09 PM

    lovely words

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  13. awalkinmyheartSeptember 25, 2012 at 5:34 PM

    I like lego dreams too. It would be so fun.

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  14. GraceSeptember 25, 2012 at 5:44 PM

    I like the personal share ~ Aspiring to be, like lego dreams, is a good one ~

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  15. SayantiniSeptember 25, 2012 at 6:11 PM

    Building lego dreams....wow what an imagery. I like the phrase "pink clouds", it depicts the innocence carefully:D

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  16. DulcinaSeptember 25, 2012 at 8:36 PM

    The title is a jewel and the haiku is very tender.
    :)

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  17. Sri ValliSeptember 25, 2012 at 9:30 PM

    Good one Pranitha...and I loved that blurry picture!

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  18. UnknownSeptember 26, 2012 at 12:32 AM

    Kids are so creative. I liked "building lego dreams." Great imagery!

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  19. UnknownSeptember 26, 2012 at 2:13 AM

    Ahh nice

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  20. PranitaSeptember 26, 2012 at 6:36 AM

    Thank you so much all for such a happy response!!! M on cloud nine! ;)

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