Monday, September 3, 2012

When the happy bird sang a sad song!


Dry tears spill softly
Heart shudders at every thought
Loneliness prevails

Flowers do not bloom
Happy bird sings slow sad song
Not the only one


This Haiku is written for the September Challenge in Haiku Heights. The prompt for today is 'LONELINESS'.


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17 comments:

  1. A Hopeless RomanticSeptember 3, 2012 at 12:02 AM

    Lonliness with a touch of Melancholy!
    Beautiful!

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  2. NAWALSeptember 3, 2012 at 12:02 AM

    not the only one! :(
    heart of a bird... lovely pranita...
    amazingly crafted as ever!

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  3. Susan DanielsSeptember 3, 2012 at 12:12 AM

    Pranita--so sad. Beautiful--and signhing in images--response to the prompt.

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  4. MarkSeptember 3, 2012 at 12:25 AM

    "dry tears"...an interesting and intriguing image!

    Loneliness of Stars

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  5. Ramesh SoodSeptember 3, 2012 at 12:44 AM

    Lot of sadness here...loneliness troubles yes..

    RS:)

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  6. Amrit SinhaSeptember 3, 2012 at 1:08 AM

    Loneliness was so beautifully illustrated through your words !!!

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  7. TigerbriteSeptember 3, 2012 at 2:46 AM

    That's lonely AND sad :(

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  8. Diwakar NarayanSeptember 3, 2012 at 3:13 AM

    Beautiful..

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  9. ElleceeSeptember 3, 2012 at 3:35 AM

    Beautiful haiku describing loneliness. I especially like the second one with the line "not the only one"

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  10. AnonymousSeptember 3, 2012 at 10:57 AM

    beautiful but sad :(

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  11. vivinfranceSeptember 3, 2012 at 11:57 AM

    Loneliness IS sad. Solitude is not.

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  12. Sri ValliSeptember 3, 2012 at 6:56 PM

    Beautiful haiku describing loneliness....Good one Pranitha....

    Lonely girl

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  13. UnknownSeptember 3, 2012 at 7:37 PM

    Loneliness leads to despair - the world is incomplete...

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  14. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 3, 2012 at 9:07 PM

    Nice one one loneliness. Well done.

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  15. Tarun MazumdarSeptember 3, 2012 at 10:02 PM

    I can understand the pain here...

    http://chaigaramchai.blogspot.in/2012/09/loneliness-haiku.html

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  16. Someone is SpecialSeptember 8, 2012 at 4:53 AM

    Wow! That's a wonderful click.. What software you used to get that effect?

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