Monday, September 10, 2012

Peppered without love.

Savage slaps hurled out
Nasty heat of the moment
Peppered without love










This Haiku is written for the September Challenge in Haiku Heights. The prompt for today is 'PEPPER'.


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12 comments:

  1. Ramesh SoodSeptember 10, 2012 at 12:12 AM

    I was expecting a tastier treat here..something spicy..but then you have created it with lot of feeling..

    RS:)

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  2. Amrit SinhaSeptember 10, 2012 at 12:17 AM

    This one really speaks a lot in so few words. Violence against women is on a rise, with such unfortunate incidents cropping up every time we open the pages of a News Paper or while surfing the News Channels. A strong message for everyone.

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  3. GraceSeptember 10, 2012 at 12:57 AM

    This is a sad but harsh reality ~ Nice one ~

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  4. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 10, 2012 at 12:59 AM

    Really a good one ... violence against women we can and may not accept.

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  5. PattiKenSeptember 10, 2012 at 1:30 AM

    Wow, this is a powerful look at the prompt. There's a lot in this message.

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  6. BarbaraSeptember 10, 2012 at 2:46 AM

    Astonishing take on this prompt. Well written message that needs to be heard!!

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  7. ElleceeSeptember 10, 2012 at 6:20 AM

    This is a powerful haiku. A forthright message for sure.

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  8. amit gangulySeptember 10, 2012 at 9:58 AM

    Nice thoughts !! Good work.

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  9. LocomenteSeptember 10, 2012 at 10:53 AM

    Too good...
    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/second-childhood.html

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  10. Vinay Leo R.September 10, 2012 at 8:11 PM

    Hmm... I'm with RSji. I was expecting a peppery treat of a diffferent variety actually. But you took it to a whole other level...

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  11. PranitaSeptember 10, 2012 at 9:50 PM

    Thank all for such a response... And for people expecting other variety... 'picture abhi baaki hai mere dost' ;)

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  12. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 11, 2012 at 8:08 AM

    Sobering.

    Pepper Tree

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