Saturday, September 22, 2012

The secret song of every heart!


Focus driven eyes
Beaks peck to pick out the tune
High spirits sung sweet

Song of heart in flight
Heavenly hums reach abode
Divine purity 


This Haiku is written for the September Challenge in Haiku Heights. The prompt for today is 'HUMMING BIRD'. 
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18 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaSeptember 23, 2012 at 12:05 AM

    "Heavenly hums reach abode" - a magical haiku :-)

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  2. Ramesh SoodSeptember 23, 2012 at 12:28 AM

    You have weaved it well.. I liked it Pranita..

    RS:)

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  3. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 23, 2012 at 12:30 AM

    What a unique take on the prompt!

    Hummingbird Heaven

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  4. provoqdSeptember 23, 2012 at 12:34 AM

    "Peck to pick" good choice of words :)
    Elegant looking pigeon in the pic.
    Keep posting Pranita :)

    Regards

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

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  5. BarbaraSeptember 23, 2012 at 2:16 AM

    How original! I like it!

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  6. Rachana ShakyawarSeptember 23, 2012 at 2:31 AM

    I loved the line.. 'High spirits sung sweet'
    Such a high indeed!! Loved the whole concept of thought & expression!!
    Keep the Spark ALive..

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  7. ElleceeSeptember 23, 2012 at 4:10 AM

    Your haiku is lovely today. I like "high spirits sung sweet" is a favourite line for me :-)

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  8. PattiKenSeptember 23, 2012 at 7:36 AM

    Very different look at a 'humming bird." I like it.

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  9. கா.ந.கல்யாணசுந்தரம் September 23, 2012 at 9:03 AM

    Good approach and telling wonder differently. Nice.

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  10. AnonymousSeptember 23, 2012 at 4:22 PM

    Wonderful use of words x

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  11. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 23, 2012 at 5:12 PM

    Such a different, but wonderful, take on hummingbird.

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  12. Susan DanielsSeptember 23, 2012 at 8:00 PM

    Nice! Original take!

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  13. UnknownSeptember 23, 2012 at 10:34 PM

    divine purity . . .love it!

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  14. Kinara :)September 23, 2012 at 11:14 PM

    Omg pranita!<3
    I must say, you just keep on going high and higher with all these haiku!:D
    Looks like you've kinda mastered it:)
    *Lots of love*:)

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  15. PranitaSeptember 24, 2012 at 12:10 AM

    Thank you all... :) I feel blessed!

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  16. smarkanSeptember 24, 2012 at 4:16 AM

    :)

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  17. jjamwalSeptember 24, 2012 at 12:47 PM

    Not a great photographer myself, but the photo would have looked better with less saturation and decreased brightness.
    Like the haiku. Somehow, reminds me of Hannibal Lecter. Maybe all haikus do :))

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  18. *Dark Angel*September 24, 2012 at 1:05 PM

    Good one, I love the mystical meaning!

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