Wednesday, September 12, 2012

Symphony of blue feelings!



Beauty crystal mask
Hid each emotion but one 
Invisible tears

Black cloud covers moon
Symphony of blue feelings
Crack in the round shell


As i believe, The Secret really works. I again wrote this haiku, and then started fishing my photo collection to find a picture that might suit... and voila.. perfect fit.. who would have thought ! Love it when this happens... which is happening quite a lot these days! :)

This Haiku is written for the September Challenge in Haiku Heights. The prompt for today is 'SYMPHONY'.


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12 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaSeptember 13, 2012 at 12:19 AM

    Lovely set yet again ... the first one is my favorite :-)

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  2. PattiKenSeptember 13, 2012 at 6:00 AM

    there's a sadness that runs through this. you're right, the photo is a perfect illustration.

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  3. ghostomSeptember 13, 2012 at 6:31 AM

    Nice fit...cool pic!

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  4. BarbaraSeptember 13, 2012 at 7:07 AM

    Such deep emotion! I love your finish 'crack in the round shell.'

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  5. kaykualaSeptember 13, 2012 at 8:23 AM

    Great photo combination to your haiku.The moon needs to show itself,yes!Nicely Pranita!

    Hank

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  6. vinaySeptember 13, 2012 at 10:12 AM

    The pic went beautifully with your words.
    Good work. :)

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  7. Ramesh SoodSeptember 13, 2012 at 9:34 PM

    I felt nice reading these..very nice.. yes..lovely Haiku that!!!

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  8. PranitaSeptember 13, 2012 at 10:57 PM

    Thanks so much pals! :)

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  9. Vinay Leo R.September 14, 2012 at 2:58 AM

    Love the first one. Complete on its own.

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  10. UnknownSeptember 14, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    So simple yet profound. The second haiku has sparked so many memories for me.
    Well done!

    http://merlinspielen.com/2012/09/13/summer-symphony/

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  11. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2012 at 8:49 AM

    Such sadness woven through this blue symphony!!
    September Heights - Repertoire of Notes

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  12. Kathy ReedSeptember 14, 2012 at 9:33 AM

    Oooh, blue is so evocative of sadness..

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