Thursday, September 13, 2012

Easy wings flutter to the sun!



Dew drops turned to pearls
Day's words, tomorrow's wisdom
Her secrets revealed

Feathers grow lighter
Easy wings flutter to sun
Revelation springs


It's amazing how the little beauties of nature can be so enlightening. Not necessarily significant, but enough to make you wonder about the secrets of this life that we live.The mystical revelation is something you get to experience once in a lifetime! The journey from ignorance to wisdom is pure bliss.

This Haiku is written for the September Challenge in Haiku Heights. The prompt for today is 'REVELATION'.


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18 comments:

  1. BarbaraSeptember 14, 2012 at 12:06 AM

    Beautiful...I love the feathers growing lighter!

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  2. Ramesh SoodSeptember 14, 2012 at 12:15 AM

    All said and done Pranita..we both had flight in pour haiku..I think flights of thoughts and spirit reveal a lot.. happy to see your comment..am I too first here..

    RS:)

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  3. GraceSeptember 14, 2012 at 12:21 AM

    A lovely picture ~ I do like the image of wings fluttering to the sun ~

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  4. odyzzSeptember 14, 2012 at 12:22 AM

    Spiritual ..Liked it..

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  5. Sanjana September 14, 2012 at 12:30 AM

    highly intellectual! very nice:)

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  6. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 14, 2012 at 1:00 AM

    Very well written haiku on this prompt. Love the imagery of the feathers becoming lighter.

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  7. PattiKenSeptember 14, 2012 at 2:53 AM

    Very nice, Pranita. I really liked the first. "Day's words, tomorrow's wisdom" - so true.

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  8. Cassiopeia RisesSeptember 14, 2012 at 3:52 AM

    Lovely Haiku. Loved it.


    Melanie

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  9. Vinay Leo R.September 14, 2012 at 4:20 AM

    I like the endign a lot... revelation springs :)

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  10. ElleceeSeptember 14, 2012 at 4:42 AM

    I, too, like the line "Day's words, tomorrow's wisdom" Well done.

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  11. LocomenteSeptember 14, 2012 at 10:50 AM

    Easy wings flutter to Sun...
    Loved that...

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/revelation.html

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  12. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2012 at 11:32 AM

    Very nice write

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  13. Amrit SinhaSeptember 14, 2012 at 1:17 PM

    Loved the set ... you have summed it up brilliantly :-)

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  14. Reading PleasureSeptember 14, 2012 at 3:43 PM

    Nice imagery

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  15. PranitaSeptember 15, 2012 at 12:53 AM

    Thank you pals!!!! :)

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  16. Judith WesterfieldSeptember 15, 2012 at 12:56 AM

    dewdrops and pearls --- love it! beautiful image

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  17. sibiSeptember 15, 2012 at 8:28 AM

    Well captured Pranita!Wisdom, bliss and ultimately part of dust!

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  18. Tilak BhatSeptember 16, 2012 at 5:27 PM

    too good...liked d spirituality and way of thinking...keep going...want to read more lines of your melting thoughts..:D

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