Chain my soul to dust
Bleed dry pumping heart for peace
Last beat screams victory!
'When you hear the last beat of my heart, you'll know we won!'
This Haiku is written for the September Challenge in Haiku Heights. The prompt for today is 'BATTLEFIELD'.
You have captured the essence of a battle perfectly ... well done !!!
ReplyDeleteLast beat screams victory...indeed ..very well said Pranita..
ReplyDeleteRS:)
Chain my soul to dust - that is a great lead-in line. Excellent haiku
ReplyDeleteLast scream ... very strong take on battlefield.
ReplyDelete"chain my soul to dust", what powerful words these are and the rest of your haiku as well. Very strong and so well said.
ReplyDeleteYou have captured the tragedy of the battlefield well. Very strong!!
ReplyDeleteI thot it very strong too, the strength perfectly displayed via your art
ReplyDeleteOh, how futile!
ReplyDeleteBattlefield
your haiku touched deep within ...nice !!
ReplyDeleteYikes....thats a dangerous looking chainand aptly suits your haiku Pranita:)
ReplyDeleteKeep writing :)
Regards
Jay
http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in
Wow--this is so profound. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThat is very powerful and I love it x
ReplyDeleteThanks all of you for this overwhelming response! Much appreciated!
ReplyDeleteCheers!