Wednesday, April 25, 2012

Carpet of stars - A Haiku.

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My snowman answers
Shapes self in reply to me
I ask to see my kismet

Snow melts to water
Sparkling glittering flowing
I follow it's way

Middle of nowhere
Carpet of stars shine above
Realization






We are always curious to know what fate has in store for us. Some believe in making their own destinies, and others believe in fate. But whatever it is, future is something you cannot see. You can guess, you can try, but you cannot see it. At the end of the day, when i go look at the stars shining in the beautiful night sky, i like to believe they are the ones who know it all, and they will always guide me through this journey of my life, to my kismet!


This Haiku is written for The Heights of Haiku - April 2012. The prompt for today is 'KISMET'. 



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14 comments:

  1. Jaideep RaoApril 25, 2012 at 10:35 AM

    Realization- whatta usage!, perfect cracker to end the haiku!

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  2. Sri ValliApril 25, 2012 at 4:13 PM

    That was beautiful realization and awesome story!

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  3. Ramesh SoodApril 25, 2012 at 10:09 PM

    This is beautifully weaved..and lovely realisation there.. RS:)

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  4. Mohini PuranikApril 25, 2012 at 11:16 PM

    Beautiful hopeful..

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  5. SurbhiApril 25, 2012 at 11:17 PM

    so mesmerizing and motivating :)

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    1. PranitaApril 25, 2012 at 11:27 PM

      I'm happy you felt the message of this haiku :)

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  6. AnonymousApril 26, 2012 at 10:43 AM

    Loved it. Its really difficult to write almost daily on new prompt but you nail it... :)

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    1. PranitaApril 26, 2012 at 11:17 AM

      Aww... that's a very huge compliment... M humbled! Thanks a lot :)

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  7. CYNOSUREApril 27, 2012 at 12:11 AM

    I loved this one...beautifully written and excellent explanation... :)

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