Saturday, April 28, 2012

Shower of rejuvenation - A Haiku.

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Long hot shower waits
Tiresome bad day at work
Thoughts pour, not water

Worries bubble up
Unanswered questions gulped in
Subdued emotions

Water wipes tears
Clarity washes off stress
Rejuvenation






The joy of taking a long hot shower after a tiring day is the best stress-buster known i think, maybe with some soothing music playing. You enter with the load of your worries and problems, only to come out unburdened and feeling light, fresh and rejuvenated! 


This Haiku is written for The Heights of Haiku - April 2012. The prompt for today is 'CLARITY'.


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33 comments:

  1. Tarun MazumdarApril 28, 2012 at 12:05 AM

    beautiful concept Pranita... needless to say, a lovely set...

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  2. Mohini PuranikApril 28, 2012 at 12:06 AM

    Fresh feeling after reading this..:)

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    1. PranitaApril 28, 2012 at 12:14 AM

      M glad the fresh waves of my haiku reached u! :)

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  3. Sasha A. PalmerApril 28, 2012 at 12:32 AM

    Nice, soothing and refreshing!

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  4. Ramesh SoodApril 28, 2012 at 12:38 AM

    Indeed..a good way to destress..and you have painted it well here.

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  5. Yellow TulipApril 28, 2012 at 1:45 AM

    Cool stress buster ...

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  6. ElleceeApril 28, 2012 at 2:32 AM

    I enjoyed your haiku. I felt the stress melting away with the arrival of clarity. Well done.

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    1. PranitaApril 28, 2012 at 11:40 AM

      Thanks Ellecee... m pleased you felt the msg of the haiku :)

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  7. carol l mckennaApril 28, 2012 at 3:06 AM

    Lovely set of haiku receiving clarity through rejuvenation ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  8. AmitAagApril 28, 2012 at 10:12 AM

    Absolutely wonderful, Pranita!

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  9. vivinfranceApril 28, 2012 at 11:38 AM

    A lovely surprise take on the prompt. Bravo.

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  10. Sri ValliApril 28, 2012 at 11:40 AM

    Beautiful one! Yes, shower does the magic!
    Fuddling thoughts

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    1. PranitaApril 28, 2012 at 11:42 AM

      M pleased you feel the same way, Valli..! Thanks :)

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  11. Tarang SinhaApril 28, 2012 at 12:40 PM

    Lovely set Pranita! You crafted it really well:)

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  12. Adura OjoApril 28, 2012 at 2:14 PM

    Refreshing. I like!

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  13. rallentandaApril 28, 2012 at 4:22 PM

    A hot shower is good..a bubble bath with a martini is better:)

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  14. Jaideep RaoApril 28, 2012 at 5:12 PM

    I wonder how you end up your haiku with a cracker everytime!, another brilliant ending :)

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    1. PranitaApril 28, 2012 at 5:54 PM

      Hehe... thanks JD for ur cracking compliment! :)

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  15. TigerbriteApril 28, 2012 at 10:08 PM

    Great write ! Water is certainly a power cleanser of negative energy and very refreshing.

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  16. CYNOSUREApril 29, 2012 at 12:29 AM

    I completely agree with you...well written... :)

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  17. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 29, 2012 at 12:56 AM

    But if there is no clarity to wash off stress?

    Seeking Clarity—and Shadows

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    1. PranitaApril 29, 2012 at 1:04 AM

      Clarity comes to most in a shower... atleast it works for me! If it doesn't for you, then maybe try a waterfall? ;)
      A shower is not the ONLY stressbuster!

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