Wednesday, April 11, 2012

Shades of possibility - A Haiku.

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Misunderstandings
Broken heart and empty soul
Possible to mend?
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Life of blind, deaf, dumb
Try explain color, voice, words
See, hear, speak - Possible?
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The winners believe 
Impossible is nothing
Losers even try?





Possibility is like Hope sometimes. Keeps you going.
But at the same time the possibility of something not going the way you want can get people into quitting even before trying! Hope is always for the best. But possibility can be negative too.

I guess my Haiku is pretty straight forward this time. So i won't explain the obvious and let you guys give me your opinions on it.



This Haiku is written for The Heights of Haiku - April 2012. The prompt for today is 'POSSIBLE'.



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31 comments:

  1. Sankara Jayanth SApril 11, 2012 at 12:03 AM

    a.m.a.z.i.n.g, pranita :)

    so full of meaning, motivation!! wonderfully written..

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  2. SurbhiApril 11, 2012 at 12:11 AM

    beautiful set ... :)

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  3. Sankara Jayanth SApril 11, 2012 at 12:14 AM

    the second haiku... well, though painful as served by fate, people, they, have invented ways of understanding the "impossibles" in other forms.. thats the best thing they could do..

    broken hearts..aah..scars, ah, they remain deep inside, while beauty does those "mundane wonders" of showing what is not and not showing what is..

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    1. PranitaApril 11, 2012 at 12:28 AM

      Possibillities... Well.. always a mystery...!
      They say impossible is nothing... Hmmmm.. Sometimes hard to agree!

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    2. Sankara Jayanth SApril 11, 2012 at 12:37 AM

      and believe me Pranita, the more possibilities we know of a certain situation, the more murk and gloom our mind and heart shall fall in.... the sheer range of possibilities freaks us out.. and individually, many possibilities freak us out...
      to know possibilities, to see them before happening, it is a goon. and i have it on my back.

      people say take it as it comes, its hard sometimes. when you know what is coming,..freaks us out, unless we take it in cool that "this is how it was meant to be. if i truly deserve better, then it would get better. but for now, this.. only this..whatever it is"..

      and yes, "all those no-particle-can-travel-faster-than-light" impossibilities, all such irrelevant "impossibilities" are what this quote covers : impossible is nothing

      truly thought, its hard to agree sometimes!

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    3. PranitaApril 11, 2012 at 12:42 AM

      True... Human mind, the thought process and the consequences... scary at times... Challenging other times!

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  4. CYNOSUREApril 11, 2012 at 12:25 AM

    A BOW down for the 2nd one Pranita...I loved it...and believe me, I'm short of words to praise it...

    anyways...no more flattering... :P
    great set of Haiku...2nd was really brilliant... :)

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    1. PranitaApril 11, 2012 at 12:29 AM

      Thanks sooooo much Sarabjeet! :)
      Totally flattered!!! :D

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  5. ElleceeApril 11, 2012 at 12:35 AM

    I really enjoyed your set of haiku. The second is my favorite because it asks an important question. Well done.

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    1. PranitaApril 11, 2012 at 12:40 AM

      Thanks a lot :) Second one is something even i cant make full justice to. Only those going through it can really tell!

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  6. sumukh bansalApril 11, 2012 at 12:42 AM

    insightful ...

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  7. RajApril 11, 2012 at 3:37 AM

    That was just brilliant. So much said in so few words. Truly inspiring and a beautifully written Haiku.

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  8. GraceApril 11, 2012 at 6:27 AM

    Hearts can be mended if its open and willing to change. If not, its difficult to change it.

    Good set ~

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  9. AmitAagApril 11, 2012 at 9:59 AM

    Very thoughtful, Pranita!...and so beautifully composed too!!

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  10. Tarang SinhaApril 11, 2012 at 10:10 AM

    Thoughtful piece of writing Pranita!:)

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  11. EktaApril 11, 2012 at 11:41 AM

    Beautifully written. There is a lot of HOPE in your writing :)

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    1. PranitaApril 11, 2012 at 12:03 PM

      Thanks a lot Ekta... M glad if my posts help spreading Hope! :)

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  12. Jeannette,April 11, 2012 at 12:48 PM

    beautifully penned haiku....everything is possible if we believe in ourselves and have faith. thanks for sharing..

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  13. dhruv solankiApril 11, 2012 at 1:03 PM

    have a deep thought and beautiful message....
    amazing.................

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  14. Sri ValliApril 11, 2012 at 5:28 PM

    All the 3 haiku got so deeper meaning if we just think!
    Beautifully written Pranita :)

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  15. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 12, 2012 at 6:15 AM

    Mending is possible if, if, if...

    “Maybe Raven Knows”

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