Sunday, April 15, 2012

Leave held breath and breathe again - A Haiku.


Wipe trickle of sweat
Pop that life changing question
Silent tense moments

Hear your quick heartbeats
She says - "Yes, I'll marry you!"
Sublime emotions

See dreams coming true
Leave held breath and breathe again
Hold hands together

Run around the field
Wind blowing through open hair
Feel joy, feel alive!

Courtesy
This Haiku is written for The Heights of Haiku - April 2012. The prompt for today is 'ALIVE'.



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25 comments:

  1. Sankara Jayanth SApril 15, 2012 at 12:14 AM

    beautiful.. Cute.. Lovely.. Those subtle emotions, wonderfuly expressed

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  2. Ramesh SoodApril 15, 2012 at 12:24 AM

    Kind of a tale you have weaved.. you are amazing talent.. Pranita..

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  3. Sankara Jayanth SApril 15, 2012 at 12:55 AM

    well i can't say this is not close to me. I have read it over and over. The marriage acceptance thing, wow. Thanks for that..really. :)

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  4. MyWordsWhisperApril 15, 2012 at 5:51 AM

    Your words made the situation alive for me. Lovely.

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    1. PranitaApril 15, 2012 at 1:47 PM

      Thanks a lot pal...! M glad if it helped! :)

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  5. AnonymousApril 15, 2012 at 10:56 AM

    What a happy way to be alive.

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  6. Sujatha SathyaApril 15, 2012 at 12:37 PM

    wow you are getting better and better at this

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  7. Tarang SinhaApril 15, 2012 at 12:42 PM

    Wonderful set of haiku! I liked the third one especially:)

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  8. Sri ValliApril 15, 2012 at 1:24 PM

    This is very lovely and romantic set....Enjoyed reading it :)

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  9. Mohini PuranikApril 15, 2012 at 2:02 PM

    So sweet

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  10. kaykualaApril 15, 2012 at 7:27 PM

    A breath of freshness from 2 young hearts.Very positive and great haiku!

    Hank

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  11. zongrikApril 15, 2012 at 9:28 PM

    i like the freedom in the last one a lot

    alive on subway senryu

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  12. CYNOSUREApril 15, 2012 at 10:53 PM

    lovely... :)

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  13. AnonymousApril 23, 2012 at 1:35 AM

    What a precious story, beautifully expressed and wonderfully alive :)

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