Wipe trickle of sweat
Pop that life changing question
Silent tense moments
Hear your quick heartbeats
She says - "Yes, I'll marry you!"
Sublime emotions
See dreams coming true
Leave held breath and breathe again
Hold hands together
Run around the field
Wind blowing through open hair
This Haiku is written for The Heights of Haiku - April 2012. The prompt for today is 'ALIVE'.
beautiful.. Cute.. Lovely.. Those subtle emotions, wonderfuly expressed
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DeleteKind of a tale you have weaved.. you are amazing talent.. Pranita..
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Ramesh ji! :)
Deletewell i can't say this is not close to me. I have read it over and over. The marriage acceptance thing, wow. Thanks for that..really. :)
ReplyDeleteHehe...thanks Jayanth! Again...! :)
DeleteYour words made the situation alive for me. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot pal...! M glad if it helped! :)
DeleteWhat a happy way to be alive.
ReplyDeleteTruly... almost everyone's dream life!
Deletewow you are getting better and better at this
ReplyDeleteThanks Sujatha! :)
DeleteWonderful set of haiku! I liked the third one especially:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Tarang! Very much...
DeleteThis is very lovely and romantic set....Enjoyed reading it :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Valli... :)
DeleteSo sweet
ReplyDeletethanks Mohinee! :)
DeleteA breath of freshness from 2 young hearts.Very positive and great haiku!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thanks a lot ya... :)
Deletei like the freedom in the last one a lot
ReplyDeletealive on subway senryu
Thanks Zongrik! :)
Deletelovely... :)
ReplyDeleteThanks bud! :)
DeleteWhat a precious story, beautifully expressed and wonderfully alive :)
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