Thursday, April 12, 2012

Coherency vs confusion - A Haiku.



Confusion prevails
Craziness beaming in its peak
Coherent thoughts please!

Future can't be seen
Set goals; while coherent steps -
pave way to success.


Sometimes a decision is a winner of a great war of confused thoughts and ideas in the head. An outcome of 'what-if's and 'so-what's. It's a crazy time where you wish you could peak into the future, see your destiny, and decide accordingly. Does that happen? Ofcourse not, cos destiny is shaped by our own decisions. Setting little goals, and following them diligently, orderly, consitently.. is what makes way to success... i think! What is your opinion?


This Haiku is written for The Heights of Haiku - April 2012. The prompt for today is 'COHERENT'.




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21 comments:

  1. Sankara Jayanth SApril 12, 2012 at 12:07 AM

    true...absolutely wonderful set, Pranita.. :)
    how politely you ask your mind for coherent thoughts..;) :)

    loved this.!!

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    1. PranitaApril 12, 2012 at 12:27 AM

      Hehe... in times like these amidst chaos and confusion... The mind, heart and soul are all to be labelled "HANDLE WITH CARE" ;)

      Cheers!:)

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    2. Sankara Jayanth SApril 12, 2012 at 12:28 AM

      and a nice photograph too.. :)
      may i know who they are?

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    3. PranitaApril 12, 2012 at 12:42 AM

      Thanks ya... I donno who they are... It was a picture i took in Goa some yrs back!

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    4. Sankara Jayanth SApril 12, 2012 at 12:46 AM

      umbrella!!! lol...okay!!;)

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    5. PranitaApril 12, 2012 at 12:47 AM

      Haha... you got me... That was the time i bought the umbrella! :P Though i go Goa almost every yr! :D

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  2. Ramesh SoodApril 12, 2012 at 12:34 AM

    Handle with care.. well said.. Pranita... somehow I found your comment to be more interesting..

    Total chaos
    my mind , heart and soul;
    handle with care..

    RS:)

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    1. PranitaApril 12, 2012 at 12:40 AM

      Haha... Thanks Ramesh ji... Wen i wrote that comment i wondered why i didn't use it in the Haiku! ;)

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    2. Sankara Jayanth SApril 12, 2012 at 12:45 AM

      i too felt the same, why not in haiku.!! lol..!

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  3. CYNOSUREApril 12, 2012 at 12:37 AM

    awesome Haiku Pranita...believe me...I'm not able to find proper words...but you have come up with something very important to me...loved it...seriously... :)

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    1. PranitaApril 12, 2012 at 12:42 AM

      Thank u soo much Sarabjeet! I'm so glad my Haiku connected to you! Cheers :)

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  4. PattiKenApril 12, 2012 at 1:59 AM

    And I agree. We can all control our destiny to some degree. One thing for sure. Those who don't are at the mercy of happenstance. And that's a scary thought.

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    1. PranitaApril 12, 2012 at 8:45 AM

      That's really very very scary!!! Just going with the flow... Oh dear God!

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  5. GraceApril 12, 2012 at 3:56 AM

    I agree with you on this ~ Nice one ~

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  6. Tarang SinhaApril 12, 2012 at 2:27 PM

    Excellent take on the prompt Pranita!:)

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  7. Sri ValliApril 12, 2012 at 7:11 PM

    Beautifully expressed about confusion :)

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  8. kaykualaApril 12, 2012 at 8:05 PM

    Great haiku, Pranita! The pic is well taken. Seems a mystery around them.

    Hank

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