Pearls match ocean white
Mermaid swims up to the rock
Waits for prince Charming
Lil' star fish whispers
'He arrives on full moon night'
Lips curve to a smile
Gazing brightest star
In love, her thirsty eyes seem
Spellbound, mesmerized!
This Haiku is written for The Heights of Haiku - April 2012. The prompt for today is 'MESMERIZE'.
This one was a easy reading after a longtime and beautifully written!
ReplyDeleteThanks JD...! Kept it simple today! ;)
DeleteA good story here..indeed mesmerising.. well done..
ReplyDeleteThank you Ramesh ji :)
DeleteCan see, the beautiful spellbound mesmerized eyes..
ReplyDeleteHappy dat it painted the picture for you! :)
DeleteLovely haiku...enchanting story ~
ReplyDeleteGrace, thank you :)
DeleteBeautiful and simple... great work there
ReplyDeleteThank you Tarun :)
DeleteI just go through the post. Really nice. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteERP gujarat
Thanks Sondra :)
DeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful story...I can imagine this in my dreams!
Sweet escape
Thanks so much Valli... :) Dreamland is the best place to live in ;)
Deletegood one Pranita...well done... :)
ReplyDeleteThank u so much Sarabjeet!
DeleteWow!
ReplyDeleteLoved your take :)
Thanks a lot Simran :)
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