The warmth from the sun
Helps some and hurts some more, yes?
Two sides, good and bad!
Warmth from a mother
Teaches some and spoils some more
Too much is too bad?
Warmth from a lover
Cheers some and pampers some more
Never enough, crave more?
Too much of something is too bad sometimes. And sometimes no amount seems ever enough. There is almost always two sides to everything. Something of which you couldn't have enough of, might someday be something you don't wanna see/feel/hear/experience ever again. And vice versa!
This Haiku is written for The Heights of Haiku - April 2012. The prompt for today is 'WARMTH'.
two sides yes... :)
ReplyDeletewonderfully written, Pranita
Thank u buddy!!! :)
Deletea beautiful set of Haiku with beautiful message...too much of truth for everyone of us to take in... :)
ReplyDeleteThank u very much Sarabjeet...! Ur too sweet with ur compliments :)
Deletegood to see that u have chosen to write good as well as bad effects ... nice haiku :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Surbhi... :)
DeleteYou are so right, everything does have two sides. It is sometimes hard to see this though. Well written haiku. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThank you soooo much Ellecee... :)
DeleteThanks much pal... :)
ReplyDeleteThe header photo of your blog is so enchanting!!
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to read more of your writings! :) Keep sharing!
Love!
http://inthepourinrain.blogspot.in/
Hey... Thank you so much :)
DeleteWelcome to Miracles Happen... Thanks for stopping by!
Cheers!
There are some good lessons to be learned from each of these haiku. The last one is definitely too true to life.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot... :)
DeleteVery nice perspective..I think balance is a good thing though warmer is much preferable than less of it ~
ReplyDeletehttp://everydayamazin.blogspot.ca/2012/04/haibun-empty.html
Thank you Grace... :)
DeleteYes, there are two sides to most things. Sadly, many people fail to recognize that until it is too late.
ReplyDeleteExactly... too late, too bad sometimes!
DeleteThis is beautiful set defining different aspects....beautifully written...I liked the first one...warmth of sun :)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Valli... :) Humbled! ;)
DeleteBeautiful set of haiku...in different aspects...Liked the first one.....:)
ReplyDeleteToo much is surely not too good :) Very well put!
ReplyDeleteThanks ya :)
DeleteA lot of wisdom in your haiku set! Thanks for sharing with us!!!
ReplyDelete