Tuesday, September 25, 2012

My paperboat, sails in your heart!


Every fold tells tale
Inner child comes alive, joy!
Glued to happy times

Screaming loud and clear
Desire to sail away
Sweet land of bliss bricks

Words disappear
My glee boat, sails in your heart!
Light , yet wet with love 







This Haiku is written for the September Challenge in Haiku Heights. The prompt for today is 'PAPERBOAT'.


16 comments:

  1. Paper boats were an integral part of our childhood ... loved the way you displayed its essence !!!

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  2. 'Light, yet with love'

    Sums of the scenario.

    Splendid writing Pranita. Keep it up

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  3. I enjoyed your set of haiku today, especially the last..very romantic,,,

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  4. "Every fold tells a tale" WOnderful line!

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  5. Beaautiful set Pranita...I loved the concluding lines....

    Life of paper boat

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  6. This is a lovely set... it will keep sailing..

    RS:)

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  7. One of the best haiku I have read up to now about paper boat.
    My favourite line, "words disappear", deep meaning here.
    Congrats!

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  8. well written...liked the complete set.. :)

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  9. Every fold tells a tale....wonderfully written! Love it.

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  10. Thanks soooo much all of you for sharing this journey with me ! :)

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