Monday, September 10, 2012

Peppered without love.

Savage slaps hurled out
Nasty heat of the moment
Peppered without love










This Haiku is written for the September Challenge in Haiku Heights. The prompt for today is 'PEPPER'.


12 comments:

  1. I was expecting a tastier treat here..something spicy..but then you have created it with lot of feeling..

    RS:)

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  2. This one really speaks a lot in so few words. Violence against women is on a rise, with such unfortunate incidents cropping up every time we open the pages of a News Paper or while surfing the News Channels. A strong message for everyone.

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  3. This is a sad but harsh reality ~ Nice one ~

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  4. Really a good one ... violence against women we can and may not accept.

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  5. Wow, this is a powerful look at the prompt. There's a lot in this message.

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  6. Astonishing take on this prompt. Well written message that needs to be heard!!

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  7. This is a powerful haiku. A forthright message for sure.

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  8. Too good...
    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/second-childhood.html

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  9. Hmm... I'm with RSji. I was expecting a peppery treat of a diffferent variety actually. But you took it to a whole other level...

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  10. Thank all for such a response... And for people expecting other variety... 'picture abhi baaki hai mere dost' ;)

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