Close your eyes and open your heart to the inside... lo n behold...! Miracles will happen!
wonderful!! 'bottled pain is another name for burning fire', wow..! the haiku is brilliant in terms of the word play, but the annotation was simply brilliant in expression. Riddle Of Hearts
Hi Pranita :)Ahh, perfect haiku for the winter season, with wine and fire.Nice post, keep it up.RegardsJayhttp://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/
Some powerful words this week - yours is no exception. Excellent.
Beautiful ... you have carved the imagery so well !!!
I like the change of color by the fireplace ~
Your image of turning blue pain red captured my imagination!
I liked the thought behind it and haiku, it is simply wonderful!
Beautiful imagination and lovely haiku Pranita :)
Very strong on imagery ! Keep it up !
Pranita,I'm affiliated with a new National Pain organization that is not up on the web yet. (I'm not paid!)With permission I would like to send them your Pain Haiku as they are interested in using creative expressions in promos and/or the site itself. However, I need written permission.If you give permission send me an e-mail at email@example.com with a cut-n-paste of the haiku you are giving permission for and whether if you want your name attached or want to remain anonymous.I believe your haiku is very strong.
This one's beautiful--especially delightful on a cold winter's night :)
Bottled pain is a long lasting sufferer. True, Pranita! Rid off it fast!Hank
interesting thought !I so loved it ..