Monday, May 28, 2012

Window to the other side.

Courtesy

  
Enclosed with secrets
Bricks of trust form foundation
Unbreakable bonds

Shadows follow light
Window to the other side
Destined horizon

Life is a mystery
Yet clue lies around corner
Believe, future, joy!




This haiku is written for the picture prompt provided by The MAG and for Haiku Heights, the prompt being 'JOY'.



39 comments:

  1. life is a mystery...and that is sometimes confusing yet also sometimes so reassuring...guess it comes down to those bricks of trust you know....

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    1. Yeah...if you've got ur foundation bricks right, the home of life wil be undoubtedly a happy destination!

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  2. Trust is the glue that holds relationships together!

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    1. Very nice set of haiku. I like the metaphor of the bricks and building trust, and believing :)

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    2. @Danny... indeed! :)
      @Loredana... Thank you dear... :)

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  3. Beautiful words Pranita . Keep writing ! :-)

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  4. Life is a mystery
    Yet clue lies around corner


    Good hint. I nearly didn't see the stairs around the house the first time. :)

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    1. Hehe... thanks... dose r my fav lines here! ;)

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  5. This is excellent.
    I also have problems loading your blog page.

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    1. Thanks buddy!
      N abt the page... m on it soon! :)

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  6. Yet clue lies around corner..good good!

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  7. it does seem as if whoever is living there is living in secret

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    1. True... like silence in grandeur!

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  8. Nicely written to perfection.
    Life is indeed a mystery and the clue seems so distant even when it lies around corner.

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    1. Thank you Ajay! Welcome to Miracles Happen!

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  9. Very philosophical, Pranita, you have opened a portal. Thanks

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  10. The last one could very much stand on its own. Imaginative!

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  11. Nice work! Great meanings between the lines! :)

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    1. Thanks a lot.. glad you found it! :)

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  12. The artwork placed on the black background of your blog is really lovely - I also enjoyed the poem.

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    1. Thank you so much Helen for appreciating my art! :)
      Cheers!

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  13. The first has deep thoughts around it. I imagine the bond of families within the house would keep their privacy intact within their own family. Great write Pranita!

    Hank

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    1. Thanks Kaykuala! You seem to have penetrated through the bricks of my wall ;)

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  14. I love the ending. So very triumphant.

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  15. we are INDEED destined to reach the horizon!
    beautiful, Pranita.

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  16. Life is a mystery
    Yet clue lies around corner
    Believe, future, joy!

    Ammmmmmazing lines... Loved it... What a delicious piece of poem...

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    1. Thanks Sajju...! :) M glad u liked it so much..

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    2. I wish there is 'like' option in your blog also.. :D would have liked both ur poem and comment... :D

      haha... got used to this like option in FB... huhhh..

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    3. Hehe... the FB addiction! I get it... ;)

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