Saturday, December 22, 2012

Snow shadows' slow dance.

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Snow feathers caress 
Warm memories churn feelings
Silent smile escapes 

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White haunting daggers
Sharp emotions hide no more
Snow shadows' slow dance









This Haiku is written for the Haiku Heights. The prompt for the week is 'SNOW'.





13 comments:

  1. Hi Pranita,

    Lovely haiku for the winter season. I can feel the chill of the snow reading the lines. Keep it up :)

    Regards

    Jay
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  2. Enjoyed both haiku. Imaginative use of snow.

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  3. Nice set Pranita ~

    Wishing you Happy Holidays ~

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  4. Beautiful Haiku. Loved it :-)

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  5. well-crafted haiku....espec. liked the feeling of 'snow feathers' perfect description of how they really feel.....

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  6. Both the haiku are beautiful..pretty good take on snow.,

    Visit me here Pranita for x'mas chain of haiku.

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2012/12/santas-smile-does-tricks.html

    RS:)

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  7. Second haiku is my very favorite - fantastic take on the prompt.

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  8. Like the idea of snow bringing warm memories-so true!

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  9. Makes me shiver reading it - great take on snow.

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  10. vivid sketches of the contrasting feelings... loved both haiku.

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