Sunday, May 6, 2012

When empty eyes don't blink.

Courtesy

Beer bottle in hands
Naked body against the wall
Wasted, losing self

Violent wind blows
Jet black hair covers fair face
Empty eyes don't blink

Tears make way slowly
Haunting negativity
Life seems a burden

Face down on hard bed
Pillow soaks with flood of ire
Ghastly hour of doom





This Haiku is written for OSI and Haiku Heights. The prompt for this week is 'DEPRESSION' and 'HOUR' respectively.


26 comments:

  1. i loved the last stanza/haiku. pillow soaked with flood of ire. Ho-oh, that line is intenssseee!! an interesting take overall. :)

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    1. Thanks a lot Jayanth! That's my fav line too ;)

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  2. Aww loved it. So touching :(

    love
    http://www.meghasarin.blogspot.com

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  3. good one,apt depiction of depression.

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  4. an expressive one, i liked the first line..

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  5. ''wasted losing self''

    these three words explain a lot.

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  6. Well done!

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    1. Thanks so much for the honor Diana! :)

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  7. I can imagine the picture! So well rendered.

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  8. the pain is screaming out of the lines

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    1. M glad the prompt was justified!!!

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  9. Nice poetry... depression is painful n you have beautifully depicted it..! :)

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  10. You write Haiku with an ease that is almost disconcerting...
    This was a brilliant piece of work !

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  11. Pranita,

    Beautiful Post. Thou li'l dark but very powerful.

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  12. Can see the depression...Lovely creative description Pranitha!
    Depression

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