Monday, June 25, 2012

The black fist of fury!


Black fist of fury
With every rise of evil
Fear the judgement time

Bad bags support quick
Crystal clear ideas melt
Leave even quicker




Every time evil rises, there is a final D-day when the judgement is passed by what we call Karma. I think we should fear that day when we feel happy by achieving something the wrong way. History is proof, bad always gets support of people like moths to the flame. But when the flame goes out, the moths fly away in search of another one. We retain only what we have gained by doing good, never the one by doing wrong.. intentionally or otherwise!


This Haiku is written for the picture prompt provided by the MAG and the word prompts provided by the Haiku Heights (SUPPORT) and the OSI (CRYSTAL).



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20 comments:

  1. Brian MillerJune 26, 2012 at 3:22 AM

    i would agree that day is coming...and if we are mindful of it what a more full life we can live...but most i think have little in the way of fear of it...

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    1. PranitaJune 26, 2012 at 1:39 PM

      Mindful efforts, really the need of this hour!

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  2. The Write GirlJune 26, 2012 at 5:52 AM

    I enjoyed your sentiments. You speak the truth. We should only achieve goals through honesty and hard work though other methods offer short cuts, it will come back to haunt you. Nicely written.

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  3. The Write GirlJune 26, 2012 at 5:54 AM

    I hope my comment went through to you as I received an error but I enjoyed your poem immensely.

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    1. PranitaJune 26, 2012 at 1:40 PM

      Thanks a lot for taking the trouble to comment agn ;) Loadsa love...

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  4. Amrit SinhaJune 26, 2012 at 4:03 PM

    Nice message a in few words...loved your haiku :-)

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  5. Silent Otto June 26, 2012 at 6:22 PM

    Your words are very deep amd wise Pranita, i will think about them , i hope this idea grows in me over time , thanks, Kuta'

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    1. PranitaJune 26, 2012 at 7:55 PM

      Thanks Kutamun for giving my thoughts some of ur own! :)

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  6. Anu ~*~June 26, 2012 at 8:23 PM

    I enjoyed ur haiku .. :)

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  7. Jaideep RaoJune 26, 2012 at 10:19 PM

    Description,. is that really you!

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    1. PranitaJune 27, 2012 at 1:59 PM

      Unless you have the password to login to my blog :P

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  8. AJune 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM

    Super stuff! Great expression of a real world sentiment! Hits home like a shot.

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  9. Ruchi JainJune 28, 2012 at 10:48 AM

    its superb,, the blog is so colorful..

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  10. HelenaJune 29, 2012 at 12:42 AM

    Words in depth indeed. I'm not so sure if I totally believe in Karma as I've had a lot conflicting views on it.

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    1. PranitaJune 29, 2012 at 2:54 PM

      I believe very strongly in Karma.. Not dat m imposing my views on u or anybdy for dat matter! Time will tell :)

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