Saturday, July 14, 2012

First peek of loving future.




  
Nectar on the lip
First peek of loving future
Promises are sealed
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Cry of the just born
Bathed with first tears of joy
True symbolic love
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Buds bloom and rejoice
Dancing in happy spirit
Swaying to my tune







The firsts are always memorable. The beginnings- the end of which is a mystery is always an exciting phase. Cheers to a happy start...!


This Haiku is written for the Haiku Heights. The prompt of the week is 'FIRST'.




31 comments:

  1. The buds really seem to blossom and dance in joy ... lovely lines :-)

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  2. ...dancing in happy spirit ~ love that line ~ wonderful haiku ^_^ ~ thanks, ( A Creative Harbor)

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  3. Now that you have said it, and in such a beautiful way, I can see that even my flowers 'dance' too!

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    1. Awww.. that's sweet! Spreading joy, are we? ;)

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  4. three different thoughts and three beautiful description.. great work Pranita.. loved it..

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    1. Thanks so much Jaskiran :) Much appreciated!

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  5. नमस्ते
    Dear Pranita, you expressed the three main forms of love in a very sweet way!

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    1. Namaste to you too Claude :)
      Thank u so much for stopping by!

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  6. I've just took a FIRST peek of your blog and I want you to know that I also do believe in "The Secret" and miracles do happen every day. Just being alive is a miracle and a gift itself.
    I'm happy to have found YOU. I see the buds blooming and dancing to your happy tune. :-)

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    1. Aww... that's so sweet of you Christine! Thanks a lot for reading me! :) M glad you find the same concepts amusing as i do! It's a pleasure knowing u :)

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  7. Loved the second one the most, Pranita! I must say, you have a lovely blog. Interesting! :) :)

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    1. Ahh! And now I see, two of my friends already like your blog. Hmm...guess I need to do some stalking around. ;)

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    2. Welcome to Miracles Happen Vaishali :) Thanks for stopping by!
      Ur more than welcome to stalk.. hehe
      Cheers!

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  8. Nice set...I specially like last one ~

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  9. Can relate to this,Pranita! Had gone through 3 issues decades ago. Now it's anticipating their turn to make the family bigger and bigger. Great haiku set, Ma'am!

    Hank

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  10. A very lovely future you have envisaged here, Pranita. May it come true for you.

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    1. That's so kind of you! Thank u pal.. :)

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  11. Some very happy beginnings in your lovely haiku :)

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  12. Your set is like Spring...new birth and growth...life anew.

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    1. That was the underlying idea indeed! :)

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  13. Beautiful Haiku from the Haiku Queen... :)

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