Sunday, July 1, 2012

Run the length of kite!





 
Spread wings high above
Capture tiny world essence
Run the length of kite

Over clouds, grounded
Look up to colored faces 
Winds teach true free flight






We learn from a kite to soar high up, but still remain grounded! Reach your goal, live your success.. but not at the cost of forgetting where you started, amongst whom you started. With your head amongst the clouds, let the heart be where it belongs... down to earth!


This Haiku is written for the Haiku Heights and the OSI. The prompts are 'TRUE' and 'KITE' respectively.

Longing luscious hair
Dreaming the beautiful life
Make peace with the Dove
 
Read my entry for the DOVE contest hosted on IndiBlogger --> How Dove nourished my Soul..!
Vote for me if you like it here.





30 comments:

  1. wind teaches true free flight... amazing lines..

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  2. Nice. I remember the feel of the kite from childhood.

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    1. Same here.. kites are an awesome experience as kids! :)

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  3. This is so beatuifully weaved.. Pranita..you have done it so well..and a very important message at that..Rs:)

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    1. Thanks a lot Ramesh ji... ur comments wer missed :)

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  4. Kites do capture an essence of a tiny world -- there is so much magic in the imagined view from a kite, the rustle of the paper, the tug of the string, and the tiny upturned faces. Great job!

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    1. You very well described my haiku Bruce ;) Thank u so much!

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  5. Good day, this is wonderful. Love the magic in it. Well done.

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  6. Oh to have the freedom of an unteathered kite.
    will sail up and up and go far away. I want
    be with it if it would be like in your haikus.
    Very nicely done, Pranita.
    ..

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    1. Thank u for the flattering compliment! M humbled Jim!
      Cheers! :)

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  7. I enjoyed each of your entries. The kite is poignant and true, and your dove poem is very sweet. Take care.

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  8. Beautiful haiku pranita and the last dove one I found it really cute! amazingly crafted haiku :)

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  9. It's such a rush to launch a kite in the sky!!! Nicely done, Pranita!!
    Uplifting message woven ~~

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  10. To be grounded in flight. Quite the feat. Birds do it so naturally.
    I really enjoyed where you took the prompt. Kites are a wonderful study in allowing the soul to soar while keeping heart connected.

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    1. Exactly... i totally agree! Thanks for reading me :)

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