Tuesday, April 24, 2012

Vision of bliss - A Haiku.

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Unseen bound shackles
Vision after release - bliss
Push back other side










Many a times we find our lives stagnant held by the chains we cannot see. We come with a lot of baggage from the past, not ready to lighten up. But when times are really bad, the strong visualize the blissful life they can lead by shedding their fears, loosening up and fighting for the release from their worries. And that hope helps them come back from the other side to where they belong. They push back their negativity to make way for a wise, happy, blissful life.


This Haiku is written for The Heights of Haiku - April 2012 and The MAG. The prompt for today is 'BLISS'.


P.S. Thanks to Jaideep from Philosopher's Stone for introducing the magic of 'The MAG' to me! :)



20 comments:

  1. Was waiting for this!, once again-.........!

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    1. I think i know what to fill in the blanks... ;) Thanks man...

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  2. Unshackle.. essence of this. good one..

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  3. Nicely done! I had not seen the quality of release in this image and you describe it very well.

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    1. Thanks much Lydia... :) Glad u appreciate it..

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  4. Nice take... it is thought provoking... first time on your blog and loved it... going to stalk you now.. :)

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    1. Ohh.. aren't you sweet! Thanks a lot! :)

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  5. Nice description. But I hardly agree with your deep thoughts. it's not always true what you tried to explain in the second part of your explanation.
    Anyways overall a nice read. Your posts are attracting lots of reader. it seems huge fan club for you. :)

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    1. My descriptions are my take on the concept i described... not necessary everyone agrees with it.. everyone is definitely entitled to their own opinion... but i would still stick to what i said..! :)

      But thanks a lot :)

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  6. so true...it takes tiime and courage but we get there..we all do :)

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  7. THe past torments some! Its not easy to let go of the past and look further into the future. But one must strive to do the same if they are to get anything out of life!
    Good post! Well written!

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    1. Very true... well said :) thank you so much...

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  8. Wise words here....beautiful blog! :-)

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