Thursday, April 26, 2012

Night waves sing berceuse - A Haiku.


Night waves sing berceuse
Bedlam in my skin wiped out
Leaving behind calm

Pandemonium
Scored out of my psyche, no signs!
Melody prevails


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There's nothing like lying by the ocean in the night, with the waves lapping your feet, the wind howling, the sound of the waves singing it's choicest songs for you. Tranquility personified, worries lost, problems hidden and bliss at it's peak!


This Haiku is written for The Heights of Haiku - April 2012. The prompt for today is 'MELODY'




36 comments:

  1. Memories of night out flashed!,lot of new words for me here :)

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    1. That was exactly what i was picturing in my head when i wrote it :)

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  2. Yes, bliss at its peak..I felt it just now..here.. Parinita..

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    1. M glad my haiku communicated to you Ramesh ji! :)

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  3. A really beautiful melody :-) . Love- Sweta

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  4. Its really good to be here again...a very lovely haiku ...loved this moment u have brought of..superb

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    1. Thanks a lot dear... :) Thanks for stopping by yet again...

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  5. Wonderful haiku ~ awesome photo ~ 'felt the waves on my feet' ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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    1. Thank u Carol... M delighted! :)
      Namaste!

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  6. A lovely haiku and photo. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.

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  7. Inspiring picture and lovely words ~

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  8. Very well done. Love the picture, it's (as Grace already said) an inspirational picture.

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    1. Thanks much Chevrefeuille! M glad u liked it.. :)

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  9. Certainly Pranita! It's exquisite lying by the beach. Your words rang loud and clear! Great take!

    Hank

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  10. Lovely set and so enchanting picture!:)

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  11. Thank goodness, after all that bedlam, melody prevails!

    Cloud Singer, Come

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  12. Very tranquil melody of waves and wind :)

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  13. Wonderful use of that word berceuse!

    Nicely!!

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  14. O how sweet is this one!!!

    Love it so much!!
    Indeed nothing so beautiful :)
    Well written!
    ~Keep the Spark ALive..

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    1. Thanks a lot Rachana... M delighted to see such an enthusiastic comment! :)
      Cheers!

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  15. Beautifully penned Pranita...Ocean at night...really a beautiful sight!

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    1. Thanks Valli... indeed a sight to behold! :)

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  16. this one beautifully written...very true..."Melody Prevails"... :)

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