Sunday, August 12, 2012

Bathing under the twilight!

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Hands covered with ash
Thorn of the beloved stings
Aching soul departs
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Tired wilted rose
Bathing under the twilight
Blooms on her tresses








This Haiku is written for the OSI and the Haiku Heights. The prompts are 'BATHING' and 'SOUL' respectively.


38 comments:

  1. Lovely set Pranitha...'Thorn of beloved stings'...Very true!...Beautiful line!

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  2. Beautiful imagination. The soul part of it moves the soul. Flower blooming on the tresses is wonderful

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  3. I liked it a lot.. well done Pranita...

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  4. Well written haiku ... and an advanced happy birthday to this wonderful blog of yours :-)

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    1. Thanks a lot G.S. for noting my bloganniversary!... I started it on Independence Day! ;)

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  5. Lovely imagery your paint with such fine words....

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  6. This is beautiful! :)
    Liked the first one the most!

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  7. Beautiful,. love the new theme of the blog!

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  8. Two Haiku - two different moods captured.

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  9. Lovely haiku.....you captured the images clearly ~

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    1. Thanks a lot Grace.. This comment from you means a lot! Thanks for always guiding me through it :)

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  10. Strong imagery there, transporting me to a place of anguish and sorrow. Filled with unspoken emotion.

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    1. Thank you Rosie for connecting to my haiku :)

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  11. Just a cluster of words
    But strongly piercing

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  12. Very pretty, Pranita. We hate to throw those wilted roses away.
    ..

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    1. Indeed Jim! Letting go has never been easy, be it human or materialistic!

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  13. got the first one!! wel done :)

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  14. Loved both the haiku, Pranita... the first one a bit more. Keep writing!

    I have awarded Miracles Happen with One Lovely Blog Award. Congrats! :)

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    1. Thanks a lot Vaishali for the award! M honored :)

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  15. Lovely set of haiku, Pranita!

    Hank

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  16. This is so sad to me. My Sister's husband died recently and she loves roses. Sigh~~

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    1. Aww.. M so sorry for her loss Lisa. May his soul rest in eternal peace.

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  17. beautifully written- you captured the image and the prompt well

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