Saturday, August 18, 2012

Peekaboo with the moon!


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Hide behind shadows
Peekaboo with round ripples
Moon's lopsided smile

Slipping clouds reveal
Suppressed laughter echoes loud
Greenery seeks turn







This Haiku is written for the Haiku Heights and the OSI. The prompts for this week are 'GREEN' and 'LOPSIDED' respectively.



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28 comments:

  1. I love the way you write haiku ... Your words are more to be seen than read :-) Well done again :-)

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    1. Thanks so much for all the lovely comments that you write which makes me super happy! ;)

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  2. I love the 'suppressed laughter'! a cheerful and lovely set...

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  3. First let me thank you for the link under the photo which brought me to a wonderful essay on the use of the moon in poetry where an amazing poem finishes the essay!

    Second, I love these 2 haiku with the moon grin turning to laughter and greenery itself green with envy! The poems are sly in every way, teasing, actually flirting, and making the landscape that much more desirable. Thank you!

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    1. It's my pleasure Susan! M glad you enjoyed this haiku :)
      N m really happy you wer able to connect with the very essence of this haiku that i intended to put across!
      Cheers!

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  4. I enjoyed the imagery in both haikus and the photo is stunning.

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  5. Beautiful visual images illustrated by these haiku! Love the idea of a moon with a lop-sided smile!

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  6. Realy nice imagery! Great take on the prompt too.

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  7. your image and haiku resonate well


    much love...

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  8. "moon´s lopsided smile"...love that!

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  9. I'm liking your lobsided smile of the moon. I hadn't even noticed before. :)
    Thank you for peeking in on my OSI this morning.
    ..

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  10. Very evocative! Thank you for sharing.

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  11. Nice landscape image. The words, nicely penned, gells well with the image.

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  12. greenery seeks turn. yes, i does and we hope it gets its fair chance. :)
    a pleasant and beautiful haiku again.

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  13. You write awesome Haiku! I adore them and what a great picture prompt.Brilliant job, Pranita.
    Mine is here
    Have you a ROCKING AND WEEK!!!
    hugs
    shakira

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    1. Thanks a lot buddy! :)
      M off to your page..

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  14. Excellent Pranita. Very beautiful Haiku.

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