Sunday, August 19, 2012

Black heart shudders from white death!

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Fade into gauche naught
Eerie chill freezes his soul
Creepy emptiness 

Lopsided luck kills
Black heart shudders from white death
Engulfing silence







It's funny how darkness can engulf you so much, to such an extent sometimes... that you can get scared of the first ray of light!!!

This haiku is written for the picture prompt provided by the MAG and the OSI with the prompt 'LOPSIDED'.



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38 comments:

  1. creepy emptiness...nice capture that....and love the opening line of the second...whew...smiles...good take...

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    1. Thanks a lot Brian! :) M glad you enjoyed it!

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    1. That's what i felt when i saw the picture ;)

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  3. I love the different spins on this guy. Eerie works, why did I not think of it? :)

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    1. Thanks buddy! M sure you'd have done better! :)

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  4. What a dark and stormy haiku! Bravo!

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  5. I love your expressive work here, Pranita. Clouded, foggy forms have that eerie, creepy feel, don't they? Thanks for sharing. =D

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    1. Thank you Linda! Overwhelmed by the response to this try!
      Cheers :)

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  6. Lopsided luck kills.

    That really works!

    =)

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  7. We often read our fears into the night..for every bump we shiver. Love your haiku poem!

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    1. Indeed..! Our imaginations and paranoia take a hike in the dark ;)
      Thanks so much Susie!

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  8. Good thoughts and nice write Pranita!

    Hank

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  9. I'm pulling up the covers, because this is when things go bump in the dark of night!

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  10. awwww...you did that so beautifully , creepy though. I wish you would have written a longer version like a story. Well done!
    Mine is here
    Have you a ROCKING AND WEEK!!!
    hugs
    shakira

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    1. Thank u Shakira... A haiku loses it's beauty when it's made into a poem. So i didn't elongate it.
      M glad u liked it! :)
      xo

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  11. This is very powerful, loved your choice of words. :)

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  12. Unlikely to ever happen to you, Pranita ! . Reminds me of waking late at night to the static test pattern after falling asleep in a chair !, thanks . The silence of the white noise

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    1. True that Kutamun! It's an eerie silence wen u wake up at night! It's as if the silence is screaming!

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