Thursday, June 28, 2012

Cold wings of fire!


Courtesy
 
Love can make you burn
Flames engulf the shining pearl
Ignorance not bliss?

Breaking broken heart 
Cold wings wrapped around the burn
Why still feel the heat?

Left what was behind
Gathering lost confidence
Trust the crystal ball? 






This Haiku is written for the SHW and the OSI. The prompts are 'CONFIDENCE' and 'CRYSTAL' respectively.


20 comments:

  1. Pranita, beautifully expressed sentiments, the three haiku make a harmonius whole!

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  2. Ah, so true but like the line ...gathering confidence ~ trust yourself and rest will fall into place ~ thanks ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)

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    1. Totally! There are phases in everyone's life...! Makes us stronger..

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  3. much confidence is lost in a break up... takes time to build back up!

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    1. Break up..? yes! But this haiku can be also viewed as someone loved, nt just a partner.. breaks your heart! Confidence is lost when anyone u love breaks ur heart!

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  4. lovely words, and familiar.....'crystal ball'? well, they love is a crap shoot

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  5. Lovely, caught all the fire and the burning left....

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  6. Forget the disappointments and make amends. Life is too short to gamble. True enough Pranita!

    Hank

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  7. It's easy to get broken.... what's difficult is to repair! But we must be ready to repair too!! Well written Pranita!

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    1. True.. Repairing/restoring is the hard part! Thanks Danny! :)

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  8. I like how the 3 work together to express the thought

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  9. You are really awesome in Haikus. This was fantastic. Very exquisitely written!

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