Monday, April 1, 2013

Ascent to surface - Haiku 'A'

Courtesy







Blue fins take over
Bubbling sky beckons and lures
 Swiveling mermaid

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 Attempts to rise high
Social gravity pulls down
Ascent to surface









This Haiku is written for the April A2Z Heights at Haiku Heights. The prompt for the day is 'ASCENT'.


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8 comments:

  1. Gemma WisemanApril 1, 2013 at 3:00 AM

    Love the image of a "swiveling mermaid"!

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  2. WabiSabiApril 1, 2013 at 7:16 AM

    There is something so romantic and mysterious about a swiveling mermaid!

    Ascent

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  3. Sankara Jayanth SApril 1, 2013 at 8:16 AM

    dreamy! and the 'social gravity' is a clever touch. loved the haiku!
    Ascent.

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  4. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 1, 2013 at 5:36 PM

    That social gravity can be hard to overcome!



    Ascent

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  5. anthonynorthApril 1, 2013 at 7:33 PM

    Enjoyed both of those. nicely done.

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  6. SimranApril 1, 2013 at 9:29 PM

    Second one is *Awesome!* :)

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  7. Reading PleasureApril 1, 2013 at 11:26 PM

    There is something elusive about the first one. And the second one is powerful. Great set

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  8. Amrit SinhaApril 2, 2013 at 12:10 PM

    "Social gravity" I loved this word :-)

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