Monday, April 1, 2013

Ascent to surface - Haiku 'A'

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Blue fins take over
Bubbling sky beckons and lures
 Swiveling mermaid

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Attempts to rise high
Social gravity pulls down
Ascent to surface









This Haiku is written for the April A2Z Heights at Haiku Heights. The prompt for the day is 'ASCENT'.


8 comments:

  1. Love the image of a "swiveling mermaid"!

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  2. There is something so romantic and mysterious about a swiveling mermaid!

    Ascent

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  3. dreamy! and the 'social gravity' is a clever touch. loved the haiku!
    Ascent.

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  4. That social gravity can be hard to overcome!



    Ascent

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  5. Enjoyed both of those. nicely done.

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  6. There is something elusive about the first one. And the second one is powerful. Great set

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  7. "Social gravity" I loved this word :-)

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