Friday, April 5, 2013

Treading with silent words - Haiku 'E'

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Expressions speak loud
Treading with silent words
Heart or broken egg shell
 
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Squint out of just birth
First blurred chicken vision
Bright life or butcher's knife



Words unsaid have a way to reach connected hearts, where as sometimes the same message communicated through words can lead to a broken heart! 

Stepping out into this world, is best compared to walking on egg shells. We have no clue what is in store for us. A happy future or a painful end.


This Haiku is written for the April A2Z Heights at Haiku Heights. The prompt for the day is 'EGGSHELLS'.



13 comments:

  1. *takes a bow* I have no words. I loved it. Completely. Heart or broken eggshells? Bright life or butcher's knife?
    You always finish your haiku with a bang! wonderful!
    My Haiku

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  2. Interesting thought Pranita and good expression :)
    cheers!

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  3. I like both haiku, but I especially like the first one. "Treading with silent words" sounds very nice. :)

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  4. Great picture.Broken hearts by silence.

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  5. Pranita...My first time here, and I am mesmerized...:)Impeccable set...!Though personally I liked the second one more:)

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  6. Good ideas!! Yes measured steps and an unknown future!! Well said. Love the quizzical expressions in both the Haiku!!

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  7. The 2nd haiku is the best of lot...
    And last line is just awesome

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  8. a really nice composition. I liked the first two lines a lot. Truly depicts the feelings!

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  9. The sweet and sour of personal connections vividly described!

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  10. Love first one. Powerful use of words.

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