Close your eyes and open your heart to the inside... lo n behold...! Miracles will happen!
A prompt can trigger so many lovely thoughts.. wow..http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/04/aroma-of-first-crush.htmlRS
hymns heard within.. brilliant!!! i loved it! Keep writing! :)And if you'd like to read mine, here it is: Vain Energy
Wonderfully written. :)
So so loved this Pranita, both stanzas are exceptional. Rising senses float and hymns heard within - delicious.
beautiful...'ambiance triggers the divine'Fine spiritual winds!! Love this..
What I loved about your recent haiku is that you have stopped following the 5-7-5 format, and that adds an extra bit of lucid charm in your words ... I have read somewhere that 5-7-5 was meant for the Japanese syllables and are not appropriate for the English formats ... rather, I always felt that these restrictions made a Haiku seem heavier when written in a strict "5-7-5" format.It's always a pleasure reading your haiku ... perhaps you may not know, but during my initial days I learnt a lot about haiku from your blog :-)
I liked 'velvety smoke' and 'crumpled aroma' as it triggers 'fragrant thoughts'!!
Brilliantly done with nice imagery