Wednesday, April 17, 2013

Thirsty beside a spring - Haiku 'P'

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Society, his desert
Footsteps on sand disowned
Harsh windy treatment

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Seek oasis of love
Thirsty beside a spring
Burning pariah




This Haiku is written for the April A2Z Heights at Haiku Heights. The prompt for today is 'PARIAH'.


16 comments:

  1. Footsteps on sand disowned....a very beautiful line..fantastic expression....so original..thanks for the treat Pranita..

    RS

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  2. Great photo and beautiful words.

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  3. Lonely and wondering, sad and unaccepted really is "harsh windy treatment" indeed!!

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  4. Harsh treatment, indeed...beautifully penned!

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  5. I really like "society, his desert". Excellent description!

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  6. Yes, there can be people who are rejected yet others play at annoying the establishment

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  7. You've captured ,so well, the loneliness inherent in being an outcast

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  8. Your site states 'here to spread magic' - with this you certainly have Pranita- beautiful!

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  9. Harsh treatment seems to be the lot of some.

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  10. 'Footsteps on sand disowned
    Harsh windy treatment' very deep and thought provoking lines!

    The second haiku is simly beautiful and conveys the discrimination prevalent in society a subtle way.

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  11. Absolutely stunning, you have such elegance

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  12. Absolutely stunning, such elegant use of language

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