Friday, April 13, 2012

The beauty of warmth - A Haiku.





The warmth from the sun 
Helps some and hurts some more, yes?
Two sides, good and bad!

Warmth from a mother
Teaches some and spoils some more
Too much is too bad?

Warmth from a lover
Cheers some and pampers some more
Never enough, crave more? 






Too much of something is too bad sometimes. And sometimes no amount seems ever enough. There is almost always two sides to everything. Something of which you couldn't have enough of, might someday be something you don't wanna see/feel/hear/experience ever again. And vice versa!


This Haiku is written for The Heights of Haiku - April 2012. The prompt for today is 'WARMTH'.





25 comments:

  1. two sides yes... :)
    wonderfully written, Pranita

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  2. a beautiful set of Haiku with beautiful message...too much of truth for everyone of us to take in... :)

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    1. Thank u very much Sarabjeet...! Ur too sweet with ur compliments :)

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  3. good to see that u have chosen to write good as well as bad effects ... nice haiku :)

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  4. So true, you showed both sides, like ying and yang :)

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  5. You are so right, everything does have two sides. It is sometimes hard to see this though. Well written haiku. Thank you.

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    1. Thank you soooo much Ellecee... :)

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  6. The header photo of your blog is so enchanting!!

    Looking forward to read more of your writings! :) Keep sharing!

    Love!
    http://inthepourinrain.blogspot.in/

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    1. Hey... Thank you so much :)
      Welcome to Miracles Happen... Thanks for stopping by!
      Cheers!

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  7. There are some good lessons to be learned from each of these haiku. The last one is definitely too true to life.

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  8. Very nice perspective..I think balance is a good thing though warmer is much preferable than less of it ~

    http://everydayamazin.blogspot.ca/2012/04/haibun-empty.html

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  9. Yes, there are two sides to most things. Sadly, many people fail to recognize that until it is too late.

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    1. Exactly... too late, too bad sometimes!

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  10. This is beautiful set defining different aspects....beautifully written...I liked the first one...warmth of sun :)

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    1. Thanks so much Valli... :) Humbled! ;)

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  11. Beautiful set of haiku...in different aspects...Liked the first one.....:)

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  12. Too much is surely not too good :) Very well put!

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  13. A lot of wisdom in your haiku set! Thanks for sharing with us!!!

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